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06:42:25 Caesar

good luck, soldier

06:41:51 AW

Well I guess I shall find out

06:40:07 Caesar

i dont do jungle, sorry :')

06:39:39 Many moons, one me

Why are Jasmine a minimum of 900 mush? It's ridiculous

06:39:22 AW

Well it had to be about a year ago as thats when I went away.
Any experience using jungle for training than?

06:38:26 Caesar

i will never stop mourning forest 2-5

06:38:07 Caesar

like a year ago i think?? maybe even before then??

06:36:57 AW

Seriously? When'd that happen? Now I have to relearn my own training process

06:32:56 Caesar

i also had fun on forest 9-19, as the worst i got from enemies was two bears at the same time, and enemy counts did occasionally get to 40

06:32:10 Caesar

akira, sorry for late reply- those levels were nerfed hard :') your best bet for training is just going to highest levels

06:27:13 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for a rp pm me please Im bored

06:27:08 Catdog

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I still remember when I used to play Draconis Theory all the time. It's sad it was taken down like this.

06:24:48 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- Hehe my lil demon

06:23:35 Stalking chat

Moon,
Oh ner hare dare thee >:(

06:21:38 Many moons, one me

Wild
Of course!
Unrelated, I'm pretty sure I just stole back a musk ox from you lol

06:18:43 Stalking chat

AW,
then yeah thats typical till you get to level ~15

06:18:41 AW

I've never had problems with low numbers before on those levels. Usually its 35+ but since coming back i just cant break 20

06:17:44 AW

2-6 in forest. I'm trying to train 2 teams

06:16:49 Stalking chat

AW,
what level are you on?

06:16:29 Stalking chat

Moon,
thank you!
But I don't really like it that much, might draw it in a different pose xD

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06:42:25 Caesar

good luck, soldier

06:41:51 AW

Well I guess I shall find out

06:40:07 Caesar

i dont do jungle, sorry :')

06:39:39 Many moons, one me

Why are Jasmine a minimum of 900 mush? It's ridiculous

06:39:22 AW

Well it had to be about a year ago as thats when I went away.
Any experience using jungle for training than?

06:38:26 Caesar

i will never stop mourning forest 2-5

06:38:07 Caesar

like a year ago i think?? maybe even before then??

06:36:57 AW

Seriously? When'd that happen? Now I have to relearn my own training process

06:32:56 Caesar

i also had fun on forest 9-19, as the worst i got from enemies was two bears at the same time, and enemy counts did occasionally get to 40

06:32:10 Caesar

akira, sorry for late reply- those levels were nerfed hard :') your best bet for training is just going to highest levels

06:27:13 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for a rp pm me please Im bored

06:27:08 Catdog

-Click-
I still remember when I used to play Draconis Theory all the time. It's sad it was taken down like this.

06:24:48 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- Hehe my lil demon

06:23:35 Stalking chat

Moon,
Oh ner hare dare thee >:(

06:21:38 Many moons, one me

Wild
Of course!
Unrelated, I'm pretty sure I just stole back a musk ox from you lol

06:18:43 Stalking chat

AW,
then yeah thats typical till you get to level ~15

06:18:41 AW

I've never had problems with low numbers before on those levels. Usually its 35+ but since coming back i just cant break 20

06:17:44 AW

2-6 in forest. I'm trying to train 2 teams

06:16:49 Stalking chat

AW,
what level are you on?

06:16:29 Stalking chat

Moon,
thank you!
But I don't really like it that much, might draw it in a different pose xD

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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