Need some criticism
https://xxwolfdawgxx.deviantart.com/art/A-commission-720774114
I used sketch.io and DA.Muro (blending)
Summer Month: 2 
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| Serpents |
| -WP Click- need cryptid names for her(would prefer shapeshifters or akin to that) pm me as Im off to do elliptical |
| Shadow Frog |
| Coveted If one of you female wolves is labor, you can use it on her to make her give birth immediately. |
| Shadow Frog |
| Acorn I’m one street away from the water. I can look out my window and see the water. My room is on the second floor |
| AshenCrow |
| When you finally get a toucan feather but this wolf is not available :') |
| Shadow Frog |
| Acorn Fortunately, there’s a nice little park right next to the townhouse where I live. |
| Acornclan |
| Froggy Man, I can't even imagine the traffic and people there </3 Oh no :( I'm sorry you can't anymore, but I'm glad you're getting to visit and did when you were younger. |
| Shadow Frog |
| Acorn I live in the suburbs of a major city. I grew up in the country. On the same side of the bay I’m currently visiting. For three years I lived in this very house with my grandparents. I enjoyed wandering around the fields and the woods. Since I’m living in suburbia, I can’t wander like that anymore. |
| Acornclan |
| Froggy That's awesome :D Getting out to hear nature and be with family is awesome Sometimes the critters get a bit annoying but they're better than sirens and other towny noises xD (to me at least) I live in a semi-rural area, not a town but there's just a lot of people to say it's rural. |
| Shadow Frog |
| Acorn I’m at my grandparents house in the countryside, visiting. I live on the other side of the bay. Last week I heard green tree frogs calling. I could hear them through the window and over my tv, they were that loud. |
| Acornclan |
| Froggy They're awesome but then can be a pain lol Me and my mother were coming home and we drove past a pond. They were so loud. The reeds and trees blcomed the sound in certain spots so we didn't know the first time we heard them since it was very brief, but the second was longer lol. |
| Quests |
| Alliance Battles |
| Challenges |
 | Polar Bear : +1 |
| Crocodile : +1 |
| Cougar : -1 |
| Chatbox |
| Serpents |
| -WP Click- need cryptid names for her(would prefer shapeshifters or akin to that) pm me as Im off to do elliptical |
| Shadow Frog |
| Coveted If one of you female wolves is labor, you can use it on her to make her give birth immediately. |
| Shadow Frog |
| Acorn I’m one street away from the water. I can look out my window and see the water. My room is on the second floor |
| AshenCrow |
| When you finally get a toucan feather but this wolf is not available :') |
| Shadow Frog |
| Acorn Fortunately, there’s a nice little park right next to the townhouse where I live. |
| Acornclan |
| Froggy Man, I can't even imagine the traffic and people there </3 Oh no :( I'm sorry you can't anymore, but I'm glad you're getting to visit and did when you were younger. |
| Shadow Frog |
| Acorn I live in the suburbs of a major city. I grew up in the country. On the same side of the bay I’m currently visiting. For three years I lived in this very house with my grandparents. I enjoyed wandering around the fields and the woods. Since I’m living in suburbia, I can’t wander like that anymore. |
| Acornclan |
| Froggy That's awesome :D Getting out to hear nature and be with family is awesome Sometimes the critters get a bit annoying but they're better than sirens and other towny noises xD (to me at least) I live in a semi-rural area, not a town but there's just a lot of people to say it's rural. |
| Shadow Frog |
| Acorn I’m at my grandparents house in the countryside, visiting. I live on the other side of the bay. Last week I heard green tree frogs calling. I could hear them through the window and over my tv, they were that loud. |
| Acornclan |
| Froggy They're awesome but then can be a pain lol Me and my mother were coming home and we drove past a pond. They were so loud. The reeds and trees blcomed the sound in certain spots so we didn't know the first time we heard them since it was very brief, but the second was longer lol. |
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