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Huzzah, my twins made it to sanctuary!! I think I'll just, go now. Goodnight everyone

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Ok it's now somehow 3 am for me, an hour after I said I'd go to bed.
I apparently I don't know how to go to bed/silly

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All he's good for right now is a meat shield xD

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He will be a glorious battle wolf one day.

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Sabbath... I am impressed just how yellow he is

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Okay I get why now XD

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Yay my nickname made it onto wild moongem

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Goodnight Moonfall c:

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Huzzah, my twins made it to sanctuary!! I think I'll just, go now. Goodnight everyone

02:10:46 Many moons, one me

Ok it's now somehow 3 am for me, an hour after I said I'd go to bed.
I apparently I don't know how to go to bed/silly

02:09:44 Many moons, one me

Lol

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Just... when I get to it LOL

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Hahah you feel maternal towards him. I get it though. I bought him because I feel the same way. He is so ugly and yellow and I love him and I will make him into a deadly weapon

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Why do I feel the need to defend these collections of pixels?

02:01:39 Rook

All he's good for right now is a meat shield xD

02:00:59 Many moons, one me

Pissboy is a wonderful battle wolf now. Don't you listen to Sabbath one bit, yellow one

01:58:23 Rook

He will be a glorious battle wolf one day.

01:57:42 Many moons, one me

Sabbath... I am impressed just how yellow he is

Enthralled Poet

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Rook
Okay I get why now XD

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Gaze upon his piss-colored brilliance
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Enthralled, I've seen worse lol

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My sweet baby boy
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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM