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 Pink kitty🐈
11:06:09 Kneecap stealer
Go to sleep or you get the frying pan /joking
 Savik
11:05:27 Nalavara
Moon, go to sleep. :)
 Pink kitty🐈
11:04:36 Kneecap stealer
Sleep
 Moonfall
11:04:03 Many moons, one me
Should I sleep or rewatch Phineas and Ferb?
 Pink kitty🐈
11:02:40 Kneecap stealer
2500 apples for a gifted apple
 Pink kitty🐈
11:00:34 Kneecap stealer
1206/1500
 Serpents
11:00:28 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
dose dune sound cool for my sand elementals subject name(or
project) or should I do desert's cry
Roaring Sands
(tiger+egale )
 Pink kitty🐈
11:00:20 Kneecap stealer
There were a few for 1200
 Pink kitty🐈
10:58:17 Kneecap stealer
1196/1200 mush for another apple, I'm sad
 lovrenee
10:54:20 renee
2 days of straight walking, I’m gonna be so dead at the beach tomorrow. my legs don’t work anymore
 Moonfall
10:53:32 Many moons, one me
Eye, that sucks honestly. Hope you sleep well
Andy, sounds about right, my little fuzz demon is sleeping after her epic fight with her tail. Fighting your own tail is exhausting apparently
 Andypaws
10:44:27 Andy/Kait [he/they]
I cant do anything around my house without scooby wanting to "help"
 Eye of Eternity
10:41:40 tern | they/he
moonfall
i have a class that ends at 6 so it falls within 2 hours unfortunately but still
i cant do it im going to bed
 Moonfall
10:35:47 Many moons, one me
Foot* of the bed. Of course I noticed that a while after I hit chat
 Moonfall
10:29:29 Many moons, one me
This cat of mine is currently chasing her tail at the food of the bed with massive zoomies... And as I typed this she just startled herself and sprint-jumped off of the bed and onto my dresser that's at the end of my bed.
She's insane. Then again she's orange
Eye
Any assignments added after a maximum of 2 hours (cause teachers be underpaid and overworked) after the school day ends shouldn't count.
 Eye of Eternity
10:24:41 tern | they/he
what do we mean it was added at 8 pm thats not fair??
 moonlight_luminary
10:24:32 Lumi/Moon/Moony
Hi chat, random question, if you buy an item from an event shop does it automatically get buried or no?
 Eye of Eternity
10:23:49 tern | they/he
oh what the fuck what do you mean another assignment was added for today i swear to everything that that wasn't there earlier today
its 11:30 i cant do this
 Serpents
10:14:07 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
anyone up for a rp pm me please Im so bored
 Moonfall
10:09:12 Many moons, one me
Black Dawn, you're welcome. I hope whatever's going on gets better for you soon, and you come out of it no worse for wear. If you do come out of it worse for wear, I will give you a drink of your choice at your preferred temperature, and some character bandaids of your choice. It might not help the bigger stuff, but at the very least it should help the soul

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 Pink kitty🐈
11:06:09 Kneecap stealer
Go to sleep or you get the frying pan /joking
 Savik
11:05:27 Nalavara
Moon, go to sleep. :)
 Pink kitty🐈
11:04:36 Kneecap stealer
Sleep
 Moonfall
11:04:03 Many moons, one me
Should I sleep or rewatch Phineas and Ferb?
 Pink kitty🐈
11:02:40 Kneecap stealer
2500 apples for a gifted apple
 Pink kitty🐈
11:00:34 Kneecap stealer
1206/1500
 Serpents
11:00:28 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
dose dune sound cool for my sand elementals subject name(or
project) or should I do desert's cry
Roaring Sands
(tiger+egale )
 Pink kitty🐈
11:00:20 Kneecap stealer
There were a few for 1200
 Pink kitty🐈
10:58:17 Kneecap stealer
1196/1200 mush for another apple, I'm sad
 lovrenee
10:54:20 renee
2 days of straight walking, I’m gonna be so dead at the beach tomorrow. my legs don’t work anymore
 Moonfall
10:53:32 Many moons, one me
Eye, that sucks honestly. Hope you sleep well
Andy, sounds about right, my little fuzz demon is sleeping after her epic fight with her tail. Fighting your own tail is exhausting apparently
 Andypaws
10:44:27 Andy/Kait [he/they]
I cant do anything around my house without scooby wanting to "help"
 Eye of Eternity
10:41:40 tern | they/he
moonfall
i have a class that ends at 6 so it falls within 2 hours unfortunately but still
i cant do it im going to bed
 Moonfall
10:35:47 Many moons, one me
Foot* of the bed. Of course I noticed that a while after I hit chat
 Moonfall
10:29:29 Many moons, one me
This cat of mine is currently chasing her tail at the food of the bed with massive zoomies... And as I typed this she just startled herself and sprint-jumped off of the bed and onto my dresser that's at the end of my bed.
She's insane. Then again she's orange
Eye
Any assignments added after a maximum of 2 hours (cause teachers be underpaid and overworked) after the school day ends shouldn't count.
 Eye of Eternity
10:24:41 tern | they/he
what do we mean it was added at 8 pm thats not fair??
 moonlight_luminary
10:24:32 Lumi/Moon/Moony
Hi chat, random question, if you buy an item from an event shop does it automatically get buried or no?
 Eye of Eternity
10:23:49 tern | they/he
oh what the fuck what do you mean another assignment was added for today i swear to everything that that wasn't there earlier today
its 11:30 i cant do this
 Serpents
10:14:07 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
anyone up for a rp pm me please Im so bored
 Moonfall
10:09:12 Many moons, one me
Black Dawn, you're welcome. I hope whatever's going on gets better for you soon, and you come out of it no worse for wear. If you do come out of it worse for wear, I will give you a drink of your choice at your preferred temperature, and some character bandaids of your choice. It might not help the bigger stuff, but at the very least it should help the soul




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Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 12:41 PM


Kortez

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My art has been looking awful lately. I have drawn this character 3 times now, and each attempt looks worse than the last. I need constructive crit, I don't care how brutal you are about it, I won't be hurt.

Feel free to redline!

Attempt 1

Attempt 2

Attempt 3

All (c) 243831/ Me

I have figured it out uwuwu thank you



Edited at March 18, 2022 05:32 PM by Excisus
Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 02:48 PM


Former Pack

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ok so the last attempt looks great!
the head on this first one is good, but what are you trying to do on the body?
the second one looks good but the head is a bit big if its what you want then it looks good also

Edited at February 24, 2022 02:49 PM by LucifersWolves
Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 02:51 PM


Nezachii

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If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.
Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 02:52 PM


Kortez

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Please do

Nez.ity said:
If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.


Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 04:53 PM


Nezachii

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Doing attempt one because everything else looks lovely *^*. I do not draw canine, anymore--yes I used to dabble back in the //first joined// ages but hopefully, you can just y'know understand that ;). While I love how you decided to do three different ones, I feel like attempt one could have some touch to it-- in case you're feeling nice and give the commissioner something to stare at; not that you know have to. ANYWAYS!

You have that edgy style, where the fur sticks out the most- as I always say go big or go home-- your attempt one could be the " GO BIG" style;o. I love the side tongue and tight collar idea, so I decided to mimic( With your permission) the style and just went crazy with the fur( Pencil work can be MUCH easier when drawing fur, you should take advantage of this punk style because it's there for YOU to improve and grow, even if you are a chibi artist( Only seen your cheebs art).

In short terms, the eye details are the show and tell, usually, when I look at canine art my eyes land on the eyes, it's the first thing I want to see- the expression, the glare, the look. I know your look is more cartoonish which I can't do but hopefully, it's still helpful.

You can do whatever with this, I only did half the job because I got uncomfortable lol.

I'll slowly add more to this so I don't spam you because again, I'm no canine artist.

Redline: (c)Nezitystudio

Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 04:57 PM


Kortez

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I heavily appreciate your words and your redline! Thank you very much!
That's the thing..i don't want my art to be cartoony.. I'm aiming for a semi realistic style, but I'm clearly far from that

Edited at February 24, 2022 10:53 PM by Excisus

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