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01:35:50 Stormy (she/her)

For me, it’s noses. For the life of me, I can never get it right.

01:35:40 Many moons, one me

Sleepy Kitty, save the apples

01:35:30

How does one join an alliance I never did that last time I played

01:35:11 Kneecap stealer

Do I save my apples or do I want to pop my wolves

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Cya sunny

01:34:41

Here anyway

01:34:30 Sun/Sunny/Sam (any)

Bye I have to leave too! Love you all!

01:34:20 Stalking chat

My alliance is STILL battling this alliance called 'The winners'
we've been fighting them for like 2 days

01:34:17

Even though the school grading system is a bit... eh right now

01:34:14 Sun/Sunny/Sam (any)

Doodle,
Very different lol. But do you hate it because it's difficult to draw right or just weird?

And yeah I too, Wild.

01:33:25

Dark
Didn't see, hopefully it's not anything overbearing but I understand where they're coming from grades are important

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Oop, see ya Doodle

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Bye Fire!

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Doodle
No you're not

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Cya doodle balloon!

Master Darkfire

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by i have to go too

01:32:51 He/They pronouns

Gotta go chat!

01:32:44 Stalking chat

I said I was*

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Wild,
Lol

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Darkfire,
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01:35:50 Stormy (she/her)

For me, it’s noses. For the life of me, I can never get it right.

01:35:40 Many moons, one me

Sleepy Kitty, save the apples

01:35:30

How does one join an alliance I never did that last time I played

01:35:11 Kneecap stealer

Do I save my apples or do I want to pop my wolves

01:34:57 Stalking chat

Cya sunny

01:34:41

Here anyway

01:34:30 Sun/Sunny/Sam (any)

Bye I have to leave too! Love you all!

01:34:20 Stalking chat

My alliance is STILL battling this alliance called 'The winners'
we've been fighting them for like 2 days

01:34:17

Even though the school grading system is a bit... eh right now

01:34:14 Sun/Sunny/Sam (any)

Doodle,
Very different lol. But do you hate it because it's difficult to draw right or just weird?

And yeah I too, Wild.

01:33:25

Dark
Didn't see, hopefully it's not anything overbearing but I understand where they're coming from grades are important

01:33:22 Many moons, one me

Oop, see ya Doodle

01:33:20 Stalking chat

Bye Fire!

01:33:10 Many moons, one me

Doodle
No you're not

01:33:08 Stalking chat

Cya doodle balloon!

Master Darkfire

01:33:04 Dark/fire/ice

by i have to go too

01:32:51 He/They pronouns

Gotta go chat!

01:32:44 Stalking chat

I said I was*

01:32:43 He/They pronouns

Wild,
Lol

01:32:35 He/They pronouns

Darkfire,
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October 15, 2020 10:00 AM

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I need advice on how good this is because 
I don't know what to think I mean to me 
it looks bad and I should work more on 
it but then I think it's good and I 
should stop working on it.

before

after

How does this look?

Edited at October 15, 2020 02:37 PM by Rose_Petal

October 15, 2020 10:10 AM

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I can't click on the link.

October 15, 2020 10:10 AM

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link doesn't work..

October 15, 2020 10:11 AM

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I fixed the problem

Edited at October 15, 2020 10:24 AM by Rose_Petal

October 15, 2020 10:24 AM

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I like it, your art looks great!

October 15, 2020 10:24 AM

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the blood could use a little more detail

October 15, 2020 10:25 AM

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Work on two layers (: if your not already.

lineart on top, coloring below. If you Change the refrence layer on bucket to the lineart, fill should still work(:

and blur the blood(:

overall, pretty nice ^^ good job

October 15, 2020 10:25 AM

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It's really pretty. I like it.

October 15, 2020 10:27 AM

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If you know how, you could try adding some shading and hilight to give it some extra detail ^^

October 15, 2020 10:28 AM

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I don't know a lot about art but I really like it! In my opinion I think a little bit more detail on the blood around the mouth would be nice :)

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