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byeee

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Jester

Go to the Alliances page, scroll down until you see one that’s accepting new members that you want to join, then go to their page and follow the instructions on what to say in the application, fill it out, send it and wait

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For me, it’s noses. For the life of me, I can never get it right.

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Sleepy Kitty, save the apples

01:35:30

How does one join an alliance I never did that last time I played

Pink kitty🐈

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Do I save my apples or do I want to pop my wolves

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Cya sunny

01:34:41

Here anyway

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Bye I have to leave too! Love you all!

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My alliance is STILL battling this alliance called 'The winners'
we've been fighting them for like 2 days

01:34:17

Even though the school grading system is a bit... eh right now

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Doodle,
Very different lol. But do you hate it because it's difficult to draw right or just weird?

And yeah I too, Wild.

01:33:25

Dark
Didn't see, hopefully it's not anything overbearing but I understand where they're coming from grades are important

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Oop, see ya Doodle

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Bye Fire!

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No you're not

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Cya doodle balloon!

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by i have to go too

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01:40:06 Starlight

byeee

01:40:02 Starlight

I'm gonna go cuddle with my pookie bear (boy friend) :D

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01:35:50 Stormy (she/her)

For me, it’s noses. For the life of me, I can never get it right.

01:35:40 Many moons, one me

Sleepy Kitty, save the apples

01:35:30

How does one join an alliance I never did that last time I played

Pink kitty🐈

01:35:11 Kneecap stealer

Do I save my apples or do I want to pop my wolves

01:34:57 Stalking chat

Cya sunny

01:34:41

Here anyway

01:34:30 Sun/Sunny/Sam (any)

Bye I have to leave too! Love you all!

01:34:20 Stalking chat

My alliance is STILL battling this alliance called 'The winners'
we've been fighting them for like 2 days

01:34:17

Even though the school grading system is a bit... eh right now

01:34:14 Sun/Sunny/Sam (any)

Doodle,
Very different lol. But do you hate it because it's difficult to draw right or just weird?

And yeah I too, Wild.

01:33:25

Dark
Didn't see, hopefully it's not anything overbearing but I understand where they're coming from grades are important

01:33:22 Many moons, one me

Oop, see ya Doodle

01:33:20 Stalking chat

Bye Fire!

01:33:10 Many moons, one me

Doodle
No you're not

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Cya doodle balloon!

Master Darkfire

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by i have to go too

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Forums > Artwork > Art Help

April 16, 2018 09:07 PM

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Here's the image

https://s14.postimg.cc/4h7dmgk29/Random_Galaxy.png

For some reason, something's been really bothering me about this picture and I can't seem to figure out what.

All critiques are appreciated, or just tell me what you wish was changed

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 09:12 PM

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Maybe more stars? We don't really see them

Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

April 16, 2018 09:37 PM

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DarkCloudClan said:
Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

Alright, lemme spam the stars and update the picture XD

Edit: UPDATED

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 11:31 PM

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Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

April 16, 2018 11:53 PM

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a m b e r said:
Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

XD Thanks, let me update it again