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01:35:50 Stormy (she/her)

For me, it’s noses. For the life of me, I can never get it right.

01:35:40 Many moons, one me

Sleepy Kitty, save the apples

01:35:30

How does one join an alliance I never did that last time I played

01:35:11 Kneecap stealer

Do I save my apples or do I want to pop my wolves

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Cya sunny

01:34:41

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01:34:30 Sun/Sunny/Sam (any)

Bye I have to leave too! Love you all!

01:34:20 Stalking chat

My alliance is STILL battling this alliance called 'The winners'
we've been fighting them for like 2 days

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Even though the school grading system is a bit... eh right now

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Doodle,
Very different lol. But do you hate it because it's difficult to draw right or just weird?

And yeah I too, Wild.

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Dark
Didn't see, hopefully it's not anything overbearing but I understand where they're coming from grades are important

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No you're not

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by i have to go too

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Gotta go chat!

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I said I was*

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Wild,
Lol

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Darkfire,
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01:35:50 Stormy (she/her)

For me, it’s noses. For the life of me, I can never get it right.

01:35:40 Many moons, one me

Sleepy Kitty, save the apples

01:35:30

How does one join an alliance I never did that last time I played

01:35:11 Kneecap stealer

Do I save my apples or do I want to pop my wolves

01:34:57 Stalking chat

Cya sunny

01:34:41

Here anyway

01:34:30 Sun/Sunny/Sam (any)

Bye I have to leave too! Love you all!

01:34:20 Stalking chat

My alliance is STILL battling this alliance called 'The winners'
we've been fighting them for like 2 days

01:34:17

Even though the school grading system is a bit... eh right now

01:34:14 Sun/Sunny/Sam (any)

Doodle,
Very different lol. But do you hate it because it's difficult to draw right or just weird?

And yeah I too, Wild.

01:33:25

Dark
Didn't see, hopefully it's not anything overbearing but I understand where they're coming from grades are important

01:33:22 Many moons, one me

Oop, see ya Doodle

01:33:20 Stalking chat

Bye Fire!

01:33:10 Many moons, one me

Doodle
No you're not

01:33:08 Stalking chat

Cya doodle balloon!

Master Darkfire

01:33:04 Dark/fire/ice

by i have to go too

01:32:51 He/They pronouns

Gotta go chat!

01:32:44 Stalking chat

I said I was*

01:32:43 He/They pronouns

Wild,
Lol

01:32:35 He/They pronouns

Darkfire,
For real ToT

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM

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Thanks every for the critique

Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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