Heyo! I'm looking for some critique on this. It's a gift and I feel it's really off. Thanks!
https://s26.postimg.cc/wklv0qk7b/BCBE6_B40-6_C2_C-4710-840_E-525226233_B98.png?dl=1
Summer Month: 2 
Night 
Clear Moon: 
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| Serpents |
| okay Im off as its late I need to start just drawing or something then head off to sleep |
| Serpents |
| @Moon im everwhere im even in your walls im all over the place so yah its how I drain power for my energy and life /lighthearted /joking XD |
| Moonfall |
| Wishing Flame feels something odd and snake-like touch them, and scrambles to their paws. Mood: Wary Serpents, have you been near my pack? /Silly |
| Serpents |
| i should reall head off soon and draw/do other things as I have school (comunity collage one class) in the morning and I want to get there on time or a bit earlier as I have my clay things to glaze and finish up two are taking a bit as I made the choice to make Rontu from ninjago's head and got to get her colors right and then a wolf head based off the shadow dojo's emblem or fixtures.... |
| Serpents |
| @Pink also thanks I will now I have only a few more to make XD then I need to make the docters and lab place and give all a companion XD |
| Serpents |
| @ pink She much like the other less then pure wolves love to drain others.... how else have some of mine lived so long XD |
| Pink kitty🐈 |
| Why can't she "siphon life" from her own pack instead of mine XD what does your wolf have against me |
| Serpents |
| @Pink again shes living off others let her siphon life off some sacrifices |
| Pink kitty🐈 |
| Also I think the last time u told acorn off she didn't listen, she did it again T^T |
| Serpents |
| does a Lynx+dragon/snak hybrid sound fitting for a glass elemental? what ever the heck that will be XD |
| Serpents |
| i ned to try and get ready to sleep or calm down and realx before I try and sleep |
| Pink kitty🐈 |
| -WP Click- Look at him🥹🥹🥹🥹ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ I'm so proud |
| Pink kitty🐈 |
| I got a boy that looks exactly like her🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹 after so long and so many tries I can finally say I'm proud of my girl |
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| Leopard : 0 |
| Death Adder : -5 |
| Chatbox |
| Serpents |
| okay Im off as its late I need to start just drawing or something then head off to sleep |
| Serpents |
| @Moon im everwhere im even in your walls im all over the place so yah its how I drain power for my energy and life /lighthearted /joking XD |
| Moonfall |
| Wishing Flame feels something odd and snake-like touch them, and scrambles to their paws. Mood: Wary Serpents, have you been near my pack? /Silly |
| Serpents |
| i should reall head off soon and draw/do other things as I have school (comunity collage one class) in the morning and I want to get there on time or a bit earlier as I have my clay things to glaze and finish up two are taking a bit as I made the choice to make Rontu from ninjago's head and got to get her colors right and then a wolf head based off the shadow dojo's emblem or fixtures.... |
| Serpents |
| @Pink also thanks I will now I have only a few more to make XD then I need to make the docters and lab place and give all a companion XD |
| Serpents |
| @ pink She much like the other less then pure wolves love to drain others.... how else have some of mine lived so long XD |
| Pink kitty🐈 |
| Why can't she "siphon life" from her own pack instead of mine XD what does your wolf have against me |
| Serpents |
| @Pink again shes living off others let her siphon life off some sacrifices |
| Pink kitty🐈 |
| Also I think the last time u told acorn off she didn't listen, she did it again T^T |
| Serpents |
| does a Lynx+dragon/snak hybrid sound fitting for a glass elemental? what ever the heck that will be XD |
| Serpents |
| i ned to try and get ready to sleep or calm down and realx before I try and sleep |
| Pink kitty🐈 |
| -WP Click- Look at him🥹🥹🥹🥹ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ I'm so proud |
| Pink kitty🐈 |
| I got a boy that looks exactly like her🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹 after so long and so many tries I can finally say I'm proud of my girl |
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