Wolf Play : Critique?

11:28:18 Lucky Ladybug

Love
if it keeps worsening, ask to go to guidance

11:27:54 Lucky Ladybug

Love
ah, the tricky part then. Honestly, keep breathing and if you have the option ask to get a drink/use the bathroom. Splash water on your face, take a couple sips and keep breathing. Then, focus on something mundane like this game or do your best in class

11:27:47

im js saying love story pls dont attack me anyone but you should better someone else that is with you in reall life and not ask ppl on wolfplay, please dont attack me ppl im js advising

11:26:11 Many moons, one me

Ok, so what box breathing is, is breath in for 4 seconds, hold for 4 seconds, out for 4 seconds hold for 4 seconds. Repeat as needed. I would like you to ask to go to the bathroom and try box breathing on your way there. Then you get there, get a paper towel of possible and run it under cold water. Place that on your face and the back of your neck. That should help

11:26:11

Lucky Ladybug
idk

11:25:54

my chest is hurting now

11:25:35 Lucky Ladybug

Love
what is causing you to panic?

11:25:04

i dont feel better

11:24:32

U betta feel better or ill be under ur bed

11:23:26

breathe in for 4 seconds and then hold your breath for 4 seconds and breathe out for 4 seconds

11:23:02

11:22:46 Many moons, one me

Ok love story, do you know what box breathing is?

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11:34:29

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my chest is hurting and im having a panic attack

11:33:55

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the teachers are not going to do anything

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11:32:21

Sorry the chat situation making me uncomfortable gonna go quiet

11:30:14 Many moons, one me

After that, I want you to tell me about your favorite characters in every fandom your in. Doesn't have to be in chat if you don't want. Or just think about them mentally

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11:28:41

Where are the teachers?

11:28:18 Lucky Ladybug

Love
if it keeps worsening, ask to go to guidance

11:27:54 Lucky Ladybug

11:27:47

im js saying love story pls dont attack me anyone but you should better someone else that is with you in reall life and not ask ppl on wolfplay, please dont attack me ppl im js advising

11:26:11 Many moons, one me

11:26:11

Lucky Ladybug
idk

11:25:54

my chest is hurting now

11:25:35 Lucky Ladybug

Love
what is causing you to panic?

11:25:04

i dont feel better

11:24:32

U betta feel better or ill be under ur bed

11:23:26

breathe in for 4 seconds and then hold your breath for 4 seconds and breathe out for 4 seconds

11:23:02

11:22:46 Many moons, one me

Ok love story, do you know what box breathing is?

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM