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my favorite wolf just has to be the one who has 0 hunting skills ;w; [Its Ludus]

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log off ;-; as long as youre online, theres a chance someone will steal from you in explore. its a random encounter

you can, however, turn off stolen food notifications in pack > account

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How do I stop people from stealing all my food? It really sucks and I can't bury most of it

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A bonsaitreasure

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savik my wolves change they go from exelent to okey same wolf

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Thank you, Eve. <3

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She was active on Saturday. She isn't missing. :)

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We are missing her.

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She's been active though.

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Sometimes life comes first.

02:38:41 Nalavara

Eve, do you know why Demon Mistress seems to be MIA?

02:35:59 Nalavara

A bonsaitreasure,
I use Make Friends on any of my wolves that are not excellent. But if I breed any of my excellent rated wolves to an OK/Bad/Very Bad, the pups will be OK or Good.

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She looks really cool!

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06:13:34 Husky

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06:07:15

Good morning

06:05:56 Nalavara

Good morning, everyone

05:52:53 Red

hi guys
hi Darkfire

05:52:08 Winter

Cae oh Cae

Master Darkfire

05:39:39 Dark/fire/ice

Hi chat

05:23:08 Amy/Anpmygdala

Caeeeee <3

05:10:13

my favorite wolf just has to be the one who has 0 hunting skills ;w; [Its Ludus]

04:43:39 Caesar

log off ;-; as long as youre online, theres a chance someone will steal from you in explore. its a random encounter

you can, however, turn off stolen food notifications in pack > account

04:41:40

How do I stop people from stealing all my food? It really sucks and I can't bury most of it

03:26:03 Queen / Jo

Good morning

A bonsaitreasure

02:54:06

savik my wolves change they go from exelent to okey same wolf

02:48:45 Nalavara

Thank you, Eve. <3

02:43:53 evebot

She was active on Saturday. She isn't missing. :)

02:42:07 Nalavara

We are missing her.

02:39:50 evebot

She's been active though.

02:39:20 evebot

Sometimes life comes first.

02:38:41 Nalavara

Eve, do you know why Demon Mistress seems to be MIA?

02:35:59 Nalavara

A bonsaitreasure,
I use Make Friends on any of my wolves that are not excellent. But if I breed any of my excellent rated wolves to an OK/Bad/Very Bad, the pups will be OK or Good.

02:34:38 evebot

She looks really cool!

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM

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Thanks every for the critique

Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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