Wolf Play : Critique?

anyone up for an rp pm me please im bored
if anyone has ideas for ocs pm me I heed help with some,
or shifter/hybrid forms for some
(ex for one its mostly how should the left eye look as I want a kinda ghostly aura look to the left side
for the other hair style and stuff

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what power sounds cool for a kitsune Dragon phoenix Hybrid?
Ash
Magma
Glass
sand
Ill take ideas as well pm me please
(once more PM ME okay im not paying atteintion to chat at all and will take ideas for any power thats cool

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Andy,
So real ToT (I don't have random people in my yard, but sometimes my neighbors appear in their yard and I get scared of them TvT)

Doodle Dragon

04:43:03 He/They pronouns

So, I have gotten better at jumping while doing quads, my jumping form is okay, but while in the air and landing, it really sucks, why does only one leg go out while bucking ToT

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Doodle oooo I love doing quads

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Andy,
So real ToT (I don't have random people in my yard, but sometimes my neighbors appear in their yard and I get scared of them TvT)

Doodle Dragon

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So, I have gotten better at jumping while doing quads, my jumping form is okay, but while in the air and landing, it really sucks, why does only one leg go out while bucking ToT

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

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July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

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July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

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July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

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July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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