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 Eye of Eternity
09:40:56 tern | they/he
acorn
hose defender /silly
i,,,,, see theres more to it? and i don't know if in this patriarchal farming culture someone with a physical disability would be ,, rich? which he needs to be? or at least able to afford luxury
oh she is
 Acornclan
09:37:33 Acorn (She/Her)
*/ not ?
 Acornclan
09:36:57 Acorn (She/Her)
Hose Defender
What about crutches ?silly those are not very fast
But if it'd be inaccurate or just a chance sadly you might have to design a full man </3
She should definitely be a cannibal though :3
 Eye of Eternity
09:36:30 tern | they/he
i dont even really need to design him he can be boring hes just a plot device
 Eye of Eternity
09:36:11 tern | they/he
bug
thank you thank you
 BuggyOs
09:34:40 Lucky Ladybug
tern
fiiiinneee let the man keep his legs
 Eye of Eternity
09:34:13 tern | they/he
bug
he needs his legs trustt
 Eye of Eternity
09:33:57 tern | they/he
acorn
there's a chance, there are records from greece and china of 'wheelchairs' from about the same time assyria existed

acorn again
oh okay </3 /silly
 BuggyOs
09:33:47 Lucky Ladybug
tern
you're no fun /silly
 Eye of Eternity
09:32:47 tern | they/he
bug
absolutely not /silly

so turns out assyria might have had wheelchairs, but i dont know if shes sumerian or assyrian
 Acornclan
09:31:06 Acorn (She/Her)
Horse Defender
Probably not </3 but maybe

Horse Protector
With wheels :3
 Andypaws
09:29:54 Andy/Kait [he/they]
Just had someone (earnestly?) ask me if ASPD is real
 BuggyOs
09:28:08 Lucky Ladybug
Tern
uhhh rock legs! or peg legs :3
 Eye of Eternity
09:27:05 tern | they/he
acorn
wait did mesopotamia have wheelchairs
i have to go look that up now

bug
,,,,,,no :( not in like,,, the year 3

acorn again
with what legs /silly
 Acornclan
09:25:42 Acorn (She/Her)
he jumps all of the ponds and rivers and streams and rocks
 BuggyOs
09:25:42 Lucky Ladybug
Tern
robot legs
 Acornclan
09:24:32 Acorn (She/Her)
Horse Defender
wheelchair go zoooooom /silly
 Eye of Eternity
09:23:31 tern | they/he
acorn
im cryinggggg he needs his legs to run across the entire middle east i fear :(
 Acornclan
09:22:58 Acorn (She/Her)
Horse Defender
Since his previous partner or family member ate them and made her more inclined to /j
 Andypaws
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White girl music, save me...

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 Eye of Eternity
09:40:56 tern | they/he
acorn
hose defender /silly
i,,,,, see theres more to it? and i don't know if in this patriarchal farming culture someone with a physical disability would be ,, rich? which he needs to be? or at least able to afford luxury
oh she is
 Acornclan
09:37:33 Acorn (She/Her)
*/ not ?
 Acornclan
09:36:57 Acorn (She/Her)
Hose Defender
What about crutches ?silly those are not very fast
But if it'd be inaccurate or just a chance sadly you might have to design a full man </3
She should definitely be a cannibal though :3
 Eye of Eternity
09:36:30 tern | they/he
i dont even really need to design him he can be boring hes just a plot device
 Eye of Eternity
09:36:11 tern | they/he
bug
thank you thank you
 BuggyOs
09:34:40 Lucky Ladybug
tern
fiiiinneee let the man keep his legs
 Eye of Eternity
09:34:13 tern | they/he
bug
he needs his legs trustt
 Eye of Eternity
09:33:57 tern | they/he
acorn
there's a chance, there are records from greece and china of 'wheelchairs' from about the same time assyria existed

acorn again
oh okay </3 /silly
 BuggyOs
09:33:47 Lucky Ladybug
tern
you're no fun /silly
 Eye of Eternity
09:32:47 tern | they/he
bug
absolutely not /silly

so turns out assyria might have had wheelchairs, but i dont know if shes sumerian or assyrian
 Acornclan
09:31:06 Acorn (She/Her)
Horse Defender
Probably not </3 but maybe

Horse Protector
With wheels :3
 Andypaws
09:29:54 Andy/Kait [he/they]
Just had someone (earnestly?) ask me if ASPD is real
 BuggyOs
09:28:08 Lucky Ladybug
Tern
uhhh rock legs! or peg legs :3
 Eye of Eternity
09:27:05 tern | they/he
acorn
wait did mesopotamia have wheelchairs
i have to go look that up now

bug
,,,,,,no :( not in like,,, the year 3

acorn again
with what legs /silly
 Acornclan
09:25:42 Acorn (She/Her)
he jumps all of the ponds and rivers and streams and rocks
 BuggyOs
09:25:42 Lucky Ladybug
Tern
robot legs
 Acornclan
09:24:32 Acorn (She/Her)
Horse Defender
wheelchair go zoooooom /silly
 Eye of Eternity
09:23:31 tern | they/he
acorn
im cryinggggg he needs his legs to run across the entire middle east i fear :(
 Acornclan
09:22:58 Acorn (She/Her)
Horse Defender
Since his previous partner or family member ate them and made her more inclined to /j
 Andypaws
09:22:36 Andy/Kait [he/they]
White girl music, save me...




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CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 05:13 PM


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So I'm looking for critique of my art
When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for
Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]
https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2
Hide and Seek [HEE contest]
http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 06:54 PM


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new artz added
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 06:59 PM


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Um they both look fine to me xD
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 07:32 PM


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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 03:31 AM


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Thank you :D
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 05:07 AM


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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.
Round out the ears a little?
The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 08:25 AM


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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 09:15 AM


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Thanks every for the critique
Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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