Wolf Play : Critique?

05:27:49 tern | they/he

ough the sun is blinding me :(

Cvt|4s

05:25:48

05:14:27 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@Tern maybe? more so for her want like Pales name (sorry im picky )

Willow moonlight

05:00:19

Hi ant
Y one got pups that they don't want

Nekros

05:00:01 Kros

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Looking for RP partners and:

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Looking for gear & decor ideas :)

04:57:42 Andy/Kait [he/they]

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I got twins finally. They're not the best but im gonna throw some dyes on em and keep em for the sake of having twin wolves

04:56:50 tern | they/he

okay im not doing schoolwork anymore

Akira Fire

04:56:03 AW

04:55:28 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Does a zero vital count as hero or no

Tartarus

04:49:50 Husky

Do I open my commission auction a second time today or no?
Also really sorry if I can't ask that in main

Wild Runners

04:43:08 Stalking chat

Oh my gosh,
litterally someone was targeting me for like 15 minutes and I had NO food and when I finally died he said 'EZ'
Like.. what?

04:41:27 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Scooby headbutted my elbow and now he is sitting in the corner of my room, pouting and whining </3

04:41:01 tern | they/he

hyunjin
wrong answer but fine

ollie
oooh thats so cool :0

04:40:29 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

someone remind me to breed wolves and stuff XD

04:40:14 tern | they/he

pixal
i would say wraith, lich, or banshee but you said softer,,,
guinevere and ginevra mean 'white shadow/phantom'

Faulty Demons

04:39:10 Ollie, Gold

Everything look okay?
-Click-

04:36:19 Kneecap stealer

Eye
Go do your schoolwork

04:35:35 tern | they/he

blelele what should i do
- schoolwork
- paint (possibly not enough time)
- or,,, secret third option? i dont know what that would be

04:34:51 Kneecap stealer

1290/1400 mush

04:34:40 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@ Tern eh again need it to fit with pale or bloodied (or tainted)

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05:27:49 tern | they/he

ough the sun is blinding me :(

Cvt|4s

05:25:48

05:14:27 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@Tern maybe? more so for her want like Pales name (sorry im picky )

Willow moonlight

05:00:19

Hi ant
Y one got pups that they don't want

Nekros

05:00:01 Kros

-WP Click-

Looking for RP partners and:

-WP Click-

Looking for gear & decor ideas :)

04:57:42 Andy/Kait [he/they]

-WP Click-

-WP Click-

I got twins finally. They're not the best but im gonna throw some dyes on em and keep em for the sake of having twin wolves

04:56:50 tern | they/he

okay im not doing schoolwork anymore

Akira Fire

04:56:03 AW

04:55:28 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Does a zero vital count as hero or no

Tartarus

04:49:50 Husky

Do I open my commission auction a second time today or no?
Also really sorry if I can't ask that in main

Wild Runners

04:43:08 Stalking chat

Oh my gosh,
litterally someone was targeting me for like 15 minutes and I had NO food and when I finally died he said 'EZ'
Like.. what?

04:41:27 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Scooby headbutted my elbow and now he is sitting in the corner of my room, pouting and whining </3

04:41:01 tern | they/he

hyunjin
wrong answer but fine

ollie
oooh thats so cool :0

04:40:29 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

someone remind me to breed wolves and stuff XD

04:40:14 tern | they/he

pixal
i would say wraith, lich, or banshee but you said softer,,,
guinevere and ginevra mean 'white shadow/phantom'

Faulty Demons

04:39:10 Ollie, Gold

Everything look okay?
-Click-

04:36:19 Kneecap stealer

Eye
Go do your schoolwork

04:35:35 tern | they/he

blelele what should i do
- schoolwork
- paint (possibly not enough time)
- or,,, secret third option? i dont know what that would be

04:34:51 Kneecap stealer

1290/1400 mush

04:34:40 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@ Tern eh again need it to fit with pale or bloodied (or tainted)

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July 6, 2018 02:35 AM

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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are greatly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also greatly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png

July 7, 2018 05:36 PM

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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!

Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows

I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color

Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

July 7, 2018 05:51 PM

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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For wolves with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For wolves with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real wolves and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!

July 7, 2018 08:12 PM

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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.

July 7, 2018 10:18 PM