Wolf Play : Critique?

10:13:06 Many moons, one me

Snake, I accidentally matched your colors lol
Eye
I'm just going back to what worked

10:12:37

chat teir list for explorer boosts?

10:11:57

Moonfall
me? :o

10:11:53 tern | they/he

moonfall
no you dont have to change it :'0

10:09:51 Many moons, one me

You know what, is good enough

10:08:22 Many moons, one me

Eye
Dang it, first snake then you... Imma just play around then scoot into the corner

10:07:45

Andy
ooo, lots of good views out there, I love adventure :D there's so many cool places to see. I get to be passenger though, so I get to see everything more, would recommend
gas is high right now though 🤔

10:07:02 tern | they/he

moonfall
hey... those are my colours... /silly

10:06:14

who made a hell hound leave pack so it ended up in sanctuary

10:05:27 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Snake

Id have to cross through 2/3 states so yeah. Adventure!

10:04:55 Many moons, one me

HECK YEAH!! Book 5 of Red Rising is ready to borrow finally!! Anyone needs me I'll just be in the corner chilling, pms are probably best if you want a reply at some point 🙃
See ya

10:04:00

Andy
adventure ✨

Xanthia

09:59:17 Vash | Xy

lmao good morning chat
its 5am and i have not slept yet

Nekros

09:58:54 Kros

RP anybody? PM me!

09:58:51 tern | they/he

currently crying over slimeknight animatics oh my god its literally minecraft get me out of here

09:57:09 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Im tempted to embark on a 14 hr drive

Silver via

09:55:39 Silv, Via

Jester
I think it's required to eat something with the cheese, even something like bread or an apple

09:55:17

guess i.. gotta eat Feta then that-

ZefhyrMaracaibo

09:55:08

any protein is good but best to balance the cheese with a fruit or vegetable

Ezranian

09:54:35 ezra, he/him

jester-
i mean you technically Can just eat cheese but i would recommend maybe adding a plant of some kind lol. maybe some bread and fruit

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10:13:06 Many moons, one me

Snake, I accidentally matched your colors lol
Eye
I'm just going back to what worked

10:12:37

chat teir list for explorer boosts?

10:11:57

Moonfall
me? :o

10:11:53 tern | they/he

moonfall
no you dont have to change it :'0

10:09:51 Many moons, one me

You know what, is good enough

10:08:22 Many moons, one me

Eye
Dang it, first snake then you... Imma just play around then scoot into the corner

10:07:45

10:07:02 tern | they/he

moonfall
hey... those are my colours... /silly

10:06:14

who made a hell hound leave pack so it ended up in sanctuary

10:05:27 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Snake

Id have to cross through 2/3 states so yeah. Adventure!

10:04:55 Many moons, one me

HECK YEAH!! Book 5 of Red Rising is ready to borrow finally!! Anyone needs me I'll just be in the corner chilling, pms are probably best if you want a reply at some point 🙃
See ya

10:04:00

Andy
adventure ✨

Xanthia

09:59:17 Vash | Xy

lmao good morning chat
its 5am and i have not slept yet

Nekros

09:58:54 Kros

RP anybody? PM me!

09:58:51 tern | they/he

currently crying over slimeknight animatics oh my god its literally minecraft get me out of here

09:57:09 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Im tempted to embark on a 14 hr drive

Silver via

09:55:39 Silv, Via

Jester
I think it's required to eat something with the cheese, even something like bread or an apple

09:55:17

guess i.. gotta eat Feta then that-

ZefhyrMaracaibo

09:55:08

any protein is good but best to balance the cheese with a fruit or vegetable

Ezranian

09:54:35 ezra, he/him

jester-
i mean you technically Can just eat cheese but i would recommend maybe adding a plant of some kind lol. maybe some bread and fruit

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July 6, 2018 02:35 AM

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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are greatly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also greatly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png

July 7, 2018 05:36 PM

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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!

Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows

I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color

Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

July 7, 2018 05:51 PM

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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For wolves with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For wolves with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real wolves and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!

July 7, 2018 08:12 PM

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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.

July 7, 2018 10:18 PM