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05:53:39 Red

Well fought!

05:51:43 tiger\Owl|she\her

hehe yep

05:51:20 Red

great

05:51:14 Red

you good?

05:51:13 tiger\Owl|she\her

I'm ready

05:50:00 Red

you hit submit when it's showing the wolf you want

05:49:42 Red

ok im ready

05:48:40 tiger\Owl|she\her

I found it but how do I select my wolves??

05:46:11 Red

I have the battle set up

05:45:38 tiger\Owl|she\her

no darkseeker

05:45:11 Red

are you a neutral?

05:45:00 Red

ok!

05:44:19 tiger\Owl|she\her

red sure I'll do it

05:43:06 Red

anyone want to PvP??

05:38:18 Winter

I may be having a raffle with 20 apples and 5 dyes >.> in the coming days

05:37:33 Jay, rushing, waters

oop bye guys! got over the time limit and I have to study!

05:37:03 Red

i like that, but maybe switch to thistle blood?

05:35:43 Jay, rushing, waters

red
the first thing that popped to mind was bloodied thistle (like the tribe names)

05:35:06 Red

I think Kanati was better. It suited him really well, Whiro is really pretty though

05:34:26 tiger\Owl|she\her

hieeeeee

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05:53:39 Red

Well fought!

05:51:43 tiger\Owl|she\her

hehe yep

05:51:20 Red

great

05:51:14 Red

you good?

05:51:13 tiger\Owl|she\her

I'm ready

05:50:00 Red

you hit submit when it's showing the wolf you want

05:49:42 Red

ok im ready

05:48:40 tiger\Owl|she\her

I found it but how do I select my wolves??

05:46:11 Red

I have the battle set up

05:45:38 tiger\Owl|she\her

no darkseeker

05:45:11 Red

are you a neutral?

05:45:00 Red

ok!

05:44:19 tiger\Owl|she\her

red sure I'll do it

05:43:06 Red

anyone want to PvP??

05:38:18 Winter

I may be having a raffle with 20 apples and 5 dyes >.> in the coming days

05:37:33 Jay, rushing, waters

oop bye guys! got over the time limit and I have to study!

05:37:03 Red

i like that, but maybe switch to thistle blood?

05:35:43 Jay, rushing, waters

red
the first thing that popped to mind was bloodied thistle (like the tribe names)

05:35:06 Red

I think Kanati was better. It suited him really well, Whiro is really pretty though

05:34:26 tiger\Owl|she\her

hieeeeee

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM

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Thanks every for the critique

Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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