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01:12:14 starrii, Lucida, Hex

Oh my goodness I just gambled this cutie

-WP Click-

I wasn't expecting to get anything good, but now I need to give it a good think on if I want to make her an explore wolf or not

Amygdala

12:54:48 Amy/Anpmygdala

Your pup has won in 5 moves.

Well atleast he won i suppose 😅

Siku of Kinapak

12:53:59 Siku

thanks Eve. goodnight to you too =)

SixBears

12:53:09 evebot

Ok, thank you. Have a good night!

Siku of Kinapak

12:52:53 Siku

Nope. It's still glitched.

Siku of Kinapak

12:51:17 Siku

checking...

SixBears

12:50:56 evebot

I want to try something real quick. Can you try to access the wolf page buttons now?

Siku of Kinapak

12:50:06 Siku

I am. But I'm about to log off in just a few minutes.
Do you have another question about the glitch?

SixBears

12:47:13 evebot

Is Siku of Kinapak still on?

Sateda

12:44:12

I don't think a Poor wrestler could've done worse actually.

Sateda

12:42:39

This ExW pup of mine is going straight to the meat grinder when FMC is over. Had me at 3/3 wins the first day and now she's losing 2/3 :)

Serpents

12:42:31 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

keep needing to explore so I can get gear and decor here.... need all the bird decor and the pink gear(pink pansy and stuff)

Ninjago Realm

12:38:19 Waterfall,Zane,Nya

oh I forgot my boy Zane.... XD then again I only have snow... thats all I can think of for him or icy/colder things

Pink kitty🐈

12:38:17 Kneecap stealer

Same for orchid petal

Ninjago Realm

12:36:07 Waterfall,Zane,Nya

@ Pink kitty one vote for Lloyd XD should have said all varries on how much decor of each color there is(as all but cole I use main color cole gets anything earthy/fitting to his nature XD)

Ghoulish

12:35:45

I’m giving spice one hour to go into labor or I’ll crash out

Pink kitty🐈

12:33:50 Kneecap stealer

Llyod

Ghoulish

12:32:04

Thatsss sososo cool

Ninjago Realm

12:31:57 Waterfall,Zane,Nya

I love getting two decor passes each year on thiss acount XD today whom should I spoil
Lloyd
Jay
Kai
Cole
Nya

Ghoulish

12:31:55

OOOOO

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01:12:14 starrii, Lucida, Hex

Oh my goodness I just gambled this cutie

-WP Click-

I wasn't expecting to get anything good, but now I need to give it a good think on if I want to make her an explore wolf or not

Amygdala

12:54:48 Amy/Anpmygdala

Your pup has won in 5 moves.

Well atleast he won i suppose 😅

Siku of Kinapak

12:53:59 Siku

thanks Eve. goodnight to you too =)

SixBears

12:53:09 evebot

Ok, thank you. Have a good night!

Siku of Kinapak

12:52:53 Siku

Nope. It's still glitched.

Siku of Kinapak

12:51:17 Siku

checking...

SixBears

12:50:56 evebot

I want to try something real quick. Can you try to access the wolf page buttons now?

Siku of Kinapak

12:50:06 Siku

I am. But I'm about to log off in just a few minutes.
Do you have another question about the glitch?

SixBears

12:47:13 evebot

Is Siku of Kinapak still on?

Sateda

12:44:12

I don't think a Poor wrestler could've done worse actually.

Sateda

12:42:39

This ExW pup of mine is going straight to the meat grinder when FMC is over. Had me at 3/3 wins the first day and now she's losing 2/3 :)

Serpents

12:42:31 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

keep needing to explore so I can get gear and decor here.... need all the bird decor and the pink gear(pink pansy and stuff)

Ninjago Realm

12:38:19 Waterfall,Zane,Nya

oh I forgot my boy Zane.... XD then again I only have snow... thats all I can think of for him or icy/colder things

Pink kitty🐈

12:38:17 Kneecap stealer

Same for orchid petal

Ninjago Realm

12:36:07 Waterfall,Zane,Nya

@ Pink kitty one vote for Lloyd XD should have said all varries on how much decor of each color there is(as all but cole I use main color cole gets anything earthy/fitting to his nature XD)

Ghoulish

12:35:45

I’m giving spice one hour to go into labor or I’ll crash out

Pink kitty🐈

12:33:50 Kneecap stealer

Llyod

Ghoulish

12:32:04

Thatsss sososo cool

Ninjago Realm

12:31:57 Waterfall,Zane,Nya

I love getting two decor passes each year on thiss acount XD today whom should I spoil
Lloyd
Jay
Kai
Cole
Nya

Ghoulish

12:31:55

OOOOO

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

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July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

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July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

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July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

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July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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