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01:12:14 starrii, Lucida, Hex

Oh my goodness I just gambled this cutie

-WP Click-

I wasn't expecting to get anything good, but now I need to give it a good think on if I want to make her an explore wolf or not

Amygdala

12:54:48 Amy/Anpmygdala

Your pup has won in 5 moves.

Well atleast he won i suppose 😅

Siku of Kinapak

12:53:59 Siku

thanks Eve. goodnight to you too =)

SixBears

12:53:09 evebot

Ok, thank you. Have a good night!

Siku of Kinapak

12:52:53 Siku

Nope. It's still glitched.

Siku of Kinapak

12:51:17 Siku

checking...

SixBears

12:50:56 evebot

I want to try something real quick. Can you try to access the wolf page buttons now?

Siku of Kinapak

12:50:06 Siku

I am. But I'm about to log off in just a few minutes.
Do you have another question about the glitch?

SixBears

12:47:13 evebot

Is Siku of Kinapak still on?

Sateda

12:44:12

I don't think a Poor wrestler could've done worse actually.

Sateda

12:42:39

This ExW pup of mine is going straight to the meat grinder when FMC is over. Had me at 3/3 wins the first day and now she's losing 2/3 :)

Serpents

12:42:31 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

keep needing to explore so I can get gear and decor here.... need all the bird decor and the pink gear(pink pansy and stuff)

Ninjago Realm

12:38:19 Waterfall,Zane,Nya

oh I forgot my boy Zane.... XD then again I only have snow... thats all I can think of for him or icy/colder things

Pink kitty🐈

12:38:17 Kneecap stealer

Same for orchid petal

Ninjago Realm

12:36:07 Waterfall,Zane,Nya

@ Pink kitty one vote for Lloyd XD should have said all varries on how much decor of each color there is(as all but cole I use main color cole gets anything earthy/fitting to his nature XD)

Ghoulish

12:35:45

I’m giving spice one hour to go into labor or I’ll crash out

Pink kitty🐈

12:33:50 Kneecap stealer

Llyod

Ghoulish

12:32:04

Thatsss sososo cool

Ninjago Realm

12:31:57 Waterfall,Zane,Nya

I love getting two decor passes each year on thiss acount XD today whom should I spoil
Lloyd
Jay
Kai
Cole
Nya

Ghoulish

12:31:55

OOOOO

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01:12:14 starrii, Lucida, Hex

Oh my goodness I just gambled this cutie

-WP Click-

I wasn't expecting to get anything good, but now I need to give it a good think on if I want to make her an explore wolf or not

Amygdala

12:54:48 Amy/Anpmygdala

Your pup has won in 5 moves.

Well atleast he won i suppose 😅

Siku of Kinapak

12:53:59 Siku

thanks Eve. goodnight to you too =)

SixBears

12:53:09 evebot

Ok, thank you. Have a good night!

Siku of Kinapak

12:52:53 Siku

Nope. It's still glitched.

Siku of Kinapak

12:51:17 Siku

checking...

SixBears

12:50:56 evebot

I want to try something real quick. Can you try to access the wolf page buttons now?

Siku of Kinapak

12:50:06 Siku

I am. But I'm about to log off in just a few minutes.
Do you have another question about the glitch?

SixBears

12:47:13 evebot

Is Siku of Kinapak still on?

Sateda

12:44:12

I don't think a Poor wrestler could've done worse actually.

Sateda

12:42:39

This ExW pup of mine is going straight to the meat grinder when FMC is over. Had me at 3/3 wins the first day and now she's losing 2/3 :)

Serpents

12:42:31 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

keep needing to explore so I can get gear and decor here.... need all the bird decor and the pink gear(pink pansy and stuff)

Ninjago Realm

12:38:19 Waterfall,Zane,Nya

oh I forgot my boy Zane.... XD then again I only have snow... thats all I can think of for him or icy/colder things

Pink kitty🐈

12:38:17 Kneecap stealer

Same for orchid petal

Ninjago Realm

12:36:07 Waterfall,Zane,Nya

@ Pink kitty one vote for Lloyd XD should have said all varries on how much decor of each color there is(as all but cole I use main color cole gets anything earthy/fitting to his nature XD)

Ghoulish

12:35:45

I’m giving spice one hour to go into labor or I’ll crash out

Pink kitty🐈

12:33:50 Kneecap stealer

Llyod

Ghoulish

12:32:04

Thatsss sososo cool

Ninjago Realm

12:31:57 Waterfall,Zane,Nya

I love getting two decor passes each year on thiss acount XD today whom should I spoil
Lloyd
Jay
Kai
Cole
Nya

Ghoulish

12:31:55

OOOOO

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Critique?

July 6, 2018 02:35 AM

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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are greatly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also greatly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png

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July 7, 2018 05:36 PM

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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!

Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows

I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color

Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

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July 7, 2018 05:51 PM

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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For wolves with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For wolves with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real wolves and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!

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July 7, 2018 08:12 PM

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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.

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July 7, 2018 10:18 PM

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x3 I haven't tried putting colored edges on a practice, I might just do that. Thanks guys >^<

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