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Eye of Eternity

03:22:03 tern | they/he

nrc
yeah apparently

03:21:38 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@nrc pmme as I NEED to ramble @echo season 4?

Night Raven College

03:21:34 NRC/Night/Raven

It's super mario galaxy

Night Raven College

03:21:18 NRC/Night/Raven

Because where I am it's not that

03:21:09 Boe

Violet
If I ever said music was easy I was definitely lying because it's not T-T

Have you been alright too though ^^

03:21:07 Chat, Noir, Venti

Lol, the Saja Boys McDonalds ads.

Night Raven College

03:20:55 NRC/Night/Raven

One question why is K-pop demon hunters only at McDonald's now?...

03:20:04 Vash | Xy

Serpents
I'm so excited, I need to also start rewatching it

Night Raven College

03:19:46 NRC/Night/Raven

Part 1

03:19:42 Vash | Xy

Boe
well thats good then, hope you've been able to rest in between somewhat
nah don't worry about it i understand why :))

Night Raven College

03:19:36 NRC/Night/Raven

Zane
I'm only on the 3rd episode of dragons rising season 4

03:18:42 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

I may poof to watch ninjago well rewatch the first half of season 4 of dragons rising

03:17:30 Boe

Violet
Yeah... pretty much. It's been a busy three months for me >.>
Sorry for dipping so abruptly back in December :')

03:17:09 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

Hi

Night Raven College

03:16:49 NRC/Night/Raven

Tern
Saja boys McDonald's ads?

03:16:24

Ellar

Eye of Eternity

03:16:15 tern | they/he

i keep getting jumpscared by these saja boys mcdonalds ads </3

03:15:18 Vash | Xy

Hi Boe :))
it has been
hope you've been doing well?

03:14:16 Boe

Hi violet xD
It's been a bit hasn't it ^^"

03:12:32 Vash | Xy

Boe :DD XDD

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Eye of Eternity

03:22:03 tern | they/he

nrc
yeah apparently

03:21:38 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@nrc pmme as I NEED to ramble @echo season 4?

Night Raven College

03:21:34 NRC/Night/Raven

It's super mario galaxy

Night Raven College

03:21:18 NRC/Night/Raven

Because where I am it's not that

03:21:09 Boe

Violet
If I ever said music was easy I was definitely lying because it's not T-T

Have you been alright too though ^^

03:21:07 Chat, Noir, Venti

Lol, the Saja Boys McDonalds ads.

Night Raven College

03:20:55 NRC/Night/Raven

One question why is K-pop demon hunters only at McDonald's now?...

03:20:04 Vash | Xy

Serpents
I'm so excited, I need to also start rewatching it

Night Raven College

03:19:46 NRC/Night/Raven

Part 1

03:19:42 Vash | Xy

Boe
well thats good then, hope you've been able to rest in between somewhat
nah don't worry about it i understand why :))

Night Raven College

03:19:36 NRC/Night/Raven

Zane
I'm only on the 3rd episode of dragons rising season 4

03:18:42 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

I may poof to watch ninjago well rewatch the first half of season 4 of dragons rising

03:17:30 Boe

Violet
Yeah... pretty much. It's been a busy three months for me >.>
Sorry for dipping so abruptly back in December :')

03:17:09 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

Hi

Night Raven College

03:16:49 NRC/Night/Raven

Tern
Saja boys McDonald's ads?

03:16:24

Ellar

Eye of Eternity

03:16:15 tern | they/he

i keep getting jumpscared by these saja boys mcdonalds ads </3

03:15:18 Vash | Xy

Hi Boe :))
it has been
hope you've been doing well?

03:14:16 Boe

Hi violet xD
It's been a bit hasn't it ^^"

03:12:32 Vash | Xy

Boe :DD XDD

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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