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Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 22, 2019 06:41 PM


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thanks I'll try that ^^
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 22, 2019 06:52 PM


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@Coyote

Thank you! That is very helpful. ^^
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 22, 2019 07:13 PM


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You're both welcome, I can't wait to see your progress. :3
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 22, 2019 07:18 PM


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https://i.postimg.cc/hG3xTj7D/fb8adbb3-5fff-474a-abae-fcd7559cf627.png

Help me it's a sketch ok.

For midnight and thunder

I use two layers at least and you gotta know were the light is coming from, and for thunder you could add some more shading under the ears on the first one, and add some under the chin, and you could use more shading becuase it took me a bit to find the shading, other ways it's good, coloring is good.

Edited at January 22, 2019 07:22 PM by Snow spark
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 22, 2019 07:26 PM


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Thanks snow spark. Yours looks pretty good. It's pretty solid looking but messy. I know that's the ruff draft. For shading I suggest a bit under the neck fur. Maybe add some spots where you can see the fur sprout out. Can't wait to see how it turns out.
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 22, 2019 07:37 PM


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Thanks thunder, I'll do that.
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 01:01 PM


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https://i.postimg.cc/tJY2Z23n/Vah.png

Can I get some critiques on this, please? I made it for a friend based on their design and creature, and I don't plan on shading it (so the colour is more accurate for a reference).
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 01:02 PM


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Coyote said:
https://i.postimg.cc/tJY2Z23n/Vah.png

Can I get some critiques on this, please? I made it for a friend based on their design and creature, and I don't plan on shading it (so the colour is more accurate for a reference).


i have no words it is beautiful

Edited at January 27, 2019 01:02 PM by midnight demons
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 02:04 PM


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Credit : 205427
https://i.postimg.cc/fR32Zr8Q/Noodle2.png

Paws are a big oof for me and so are muzzles but does anyone have any advice with that or anything else on how to improve my drawings?
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 02:25 PM


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Coyote said:
https://i.postimg.cc/tJY2Z23n/Vah.png

Can I get some critiques on this, please? I made it for a friend based on their design and creature, and I don't plan on shading it (so the colour is more accurate for a reference).


This looks excellent!
I dont have much to say on this, but I will say the neck posing looks off to me, it doesnt seem to flow with the way the rest of the body is twisted.
I think instead of a sharp turn right behind the shoulders, with how long the neck its it would probably have been better to let it curve continue down with the flow of the back and then about half way down or something have it curve back up for the head.
If that makes any sense.
Again, great job!



B R A V E said:
Credit : 205427
https://i.postimg.cc/fR32Zr8Q/Noodle2.png

Paws are a big oof for me and so are muzzles but does anyone have any advice with that or anything else on how to improve my drawings?


This is too adorable *^*

I think the best thing to help with the paw would be A) Make it larger, it looks a bit too tiny. and B) You should probably make the line on the top of the first toe (The one farthest back) match the lines on the tops of the other two toe (Or vice versa). It doesn't match the other two because, while it's straight and flat on the top, the other two hold a curve.
For the muzzle, I love it! The only think is the nose and mouth seem too tilted for the face. Id say bring the right side (Right side of the drawing, as in the side the eye can be seen) down a bit and straighten the nose out some
The only other thing that would need to be touched would be the ear thats perked up seems to need to be widened a bit to match the ear thats laying over.

Hope this helps!
Such a cute drawing! ^^

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