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 Lackadaisy
11:22:51 Stray | ( He/Him )
Very off topic, but I can't help but admire how my den page looks with the basic Gray palette.

-Click-
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11:22:10 Toliska, Desti, Coy
@Qyu
You're welcome ^^
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11:21:48 Toliska, Desti, Coy
@Vah
Yeah.. no idea what is causing the cramp unfortunately. Wish I did but it just randomly started.
Yeah. It's been about a year since I last saw her ^^ I can't wait

I'm sorry that you're feeling lost on those things. Is there anything I could do to help at all?
 Qyusen
11:20:26 Qyu - all pronouns
Desti-
Thank you for this wisdom
''''
Bliss
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11:19:37 Toliska, Desti, Coy
@Qyu
You can stop the weird letters things from appearing if you turn smart punctuation off on your device :)
 Zeraphia
11:18:44 Sickly Vah
Desti

Ooof that's less fun. About the cramp. But that's great! A friend trip is always fun!

I'm just writing up a response and trying to figure out how to do closed species stuff... I'm a little lost.

Stray

Pffft XD that's iconic.
 Qyusen
11:18:40 Qyu - all pronouns
Very interesting :O
 Lackadaisy
11:17:55 Stray | ( He/Him )
Qyu,

I can't imagine that Lily would be all too familiar with different kinds of fish. While being a demigod of Poseidon, she actually has never been to the ocean, and isn't quite the type to study up on her fish types. Nor has she met her father, who I could infer would be much inclined to teach her real curses, rather than "holy mother of flying walruses".
 Qyusen
11:16:22 Qyu - all pronouns
Uaghhh horrid mobile user characters
 Qyusen
11:15:56 Qyu - all pronouns
Stray- but what about the flying fish… how do they feel about that
 Lackadaisy
11:15:10 Stray | ( He/Him )
Vah,

I can imagine her saying "princes of Poseidon", or "when fish fly".
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11:14:33 Toliska, Desti, Coy
@Vah
Right now I have a pretty bad cramp somewhere in the left side of my stomach and my left flank. Aside from that, and the usual things, I think I am okay.
Getting together with a friend tomorrow so I am excited about that.

How're you
 Zeraphia
11:12:49 Sickly Vah
Stray

Oh you have no idea. That... that's a usual one. I've got a few others--
 Zeraphia
11:12:30 Sickly Vah
Desti

How are you doing?
 Lackadaisy
11:12:28 Stray | ( He/Him )
Vah,

Holy.. catfish?

That's becoming a Lilian quote.
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11:12:19 Toliska, Desti, Coy
@Lack
Hello :)
For me it's currently 9:12 pm
 United force
11:12:15 
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 Qyusen
11:12:02 Qyu - all pronouns
Thanks :D
 Lackadaisy
11:11:41 Stray | ( He/Him )
Desti,

Good evening. /, what time of day it may be for you.
 Lackadaisy
11:11:14 Stray | ( He/Him )
Qyu,

Ah, they're gorgeous.

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Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:14 AM


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I'm bored and I love helping people, so in between commissions I'd love to help people correct their lines and give advice/critique.

I'm still a learner and I'm far from a professional artist so I don't know how this'll go.. :u

Just post down below with your art and such and I'll do my best to get back to you and offer corrections/advice/critique etc.. :)

I may/will be a little harsh on the critique. c:
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:33 AM


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just finished this for someone.

https://i.imgsafe.org/7e/7e1ca5f3f2.png
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:43 AM


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Robin XD -

overall I think it's a really cute piece! I can see your style coming along nicely. However, there are a few things I would change.

https://s22.postimg.cc/qau6rqjqp/1534588603291.png
Here I've given you a rough redline of how the kitty's body should look. Remember that an animal's face is just about symmetrical. Their eyes are both in the same place and their ears are the same size. Don't forget that floof c:

I feel like the front legs are a bit too spaced apart and the chest is a bit wide. I've drawn a guide on where the front leg should be. I know I sound nit-picky but animal paws have four toes. Try to remember that c:

As well as that the back legs are bending completely wrong. The hind left leg is twisting over as if it is broken :'D the guide I drew was rushed and I went a bit wonky on the back legs too, apologies. ^^'

I hope that helps. As I've said before it's an overall lovely piece. Keep practising! I can see your style forming! ^0^
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:49 AM


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Thankz <3 its a lot of help!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:44 AM


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Oof.. I need help Xd
http://i66.tinypic.com/65skk9.jpg
Thanks for making this thread!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:45 AM


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Heck im posting a crappy drawing in :D
Please.. help me lol
https://s33.postimg.cc/uxp2a5o5b/7_F850_D40-9_CAE-4110-_A622-_CA773_A64035_D.jpg

Edited at August 18, 2018 11:47 AM by Epoch
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:52 AM


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Twilight Moon -

That's a cute little piece you've got there. c:

https://s33.postimg.cc/ojzz74ogv/1534607305694.png

Here's the basic redline. It's pretty messy :'D
I recommend not using massive circles to draw heads. It makes them bigger than they need to be. I've noticed you rely too much on circles in your drawings and tend to make the heads the main point of the drawing, which ends up with a tiny body.

I'd also recommend taking a look at some canine pictures for reference. Draw some lines over the joints and such and see how the body moves. Just make sure you're using stock. c:

Keep practising and you'll soon be brilliant!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 03:33 PM


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Oof that's epic!
Let me give it a try :3
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 09:02 PM


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<3

Edited at August 19, 2018 08:42 AM by Robin XD
Free Line CorrectionAugust 19, 2018 08:41 AM


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lel i am going to be using this so much XD

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