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 Master Darkfire
12:53:45 Dark/fire/ice
what should I call this chaotic cult of little demons and body part stealers??
 Master Darkfire
12:52:37 Dark/fire/ice
yours*

doodle I'm short ^^ I can fit
 Master Darkfire
12:52:10 Dark/fire/ice
yeppppp I FINALY got out of khaos's absolute MESS. took me like a week to get out LMAO. doodle I'm in urs now 😈
 Wild Runners
12:51:56 Stalking chat
Doodle balloon,
they fit in there somehow LOL
 Lurking shadows
12:51:41 
I became a pancake then i guess
 Doodle Dragon
12:51:22 He/They pronouns
Lurking,
There's no room under my bed or closet ToT
 Doodle Dragon
12:51:02 He/They pronouns
Cinn,
Also T says happy birthday ^^ (try to guess who it is, I'll tell you when I see you :p)
 Lurking shadows
12:50:52 
YESSS muhehehe and Darkfire is in your closet
 Doodle Dragon
12:50:33 He/They pronouns
Cinn,
Yay!!
 Doodle Dragon
12:49:40 He/They pronouns
Lurking,
Nooo
 Cinnamon Bloom
12:49:32 Cinn / Ace
DD
i'm finally about to work on the last picture since the due date for this got moved to tomorrow
because some people were finished and others barely started
 Master Darkfire
12:49:15 Dark/fire/ice
I'm not doing it
 Lurking shadows
12:49:06 
Im still under your bed remember
 Doodle Dragon
12:49:00 He/They pronouns
Lurking,
:3
 Lurking shadows
12:48:51 
Again today Doodle Dragon ToT
 Doodle Dragon
12:48:14 He/They pronouns
Also, helloo! :D
 Doodle Dragon
12:48:06 He/They pronouns
Paws?

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 Wild Runners
12:48:02 Stalking chat
Actually that coat as axanthic don't look to bad
 Lurking shadows
12:47:13 
And she is 1 pound ToT
 Eye of Eternity
12:45:42 tern | they/he
bonsai
like wrestling and howling? theres no way to change that

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 Master Darkfire
12:53:45 Dark/fire/ice
what should I call this chaotic cult of little demons and body part stealers??
 Master Darkfire
12:52:37 Dark/fire/ice
yours*

doodle I'm short ^^ I can fit
 Master Darkfire
12:52:10 Dark/fire/ice
yeppppp I FINALY got out of khaos's absolute MESS. took me like a week to get out LMAO. doodle I'm in urs now 😈
 Wild Runners
12:51:56 Stalking chat
Doodle balloon,
they fit in there somehow LOL
 Lurking shadows
12:51:41 
I became a pancake then i guess
 Doodle Dragon
12:51:22 He/They pronouns
Lurking,
There's no room under my bed or closet ToT
 Doodle Dragon
12:51:02 He/They pronouns
Cinn,
Also T says happy birthday ^^ (try to guess who it is, I'll tell you when I see you :p)
 Lurking shadows
12:50:52 
YESSS muhehehe and Darkfire is in your closet
 Doodle Dragon
12:50:33 He/They pronouns
Cinn,
Yay!!
 Doodle Dragon
12:49:40 He/They pronouns
Lurking,
Nooo
 Cinnamon Bloom
12:49:32 Cinn / Ace
DD
i'm finally about to work on the last picture since the due date for this got moved to tomorrow
because some people were finished and others barely started
 Master Darkfire
12:49:15 Dark/fire/ice
I'm not doing it
 Lurking shadows
12:49:06 
Im still under your bed remember
 Doodle Dragon
12:49:00 He/They pronouns
Lurking,
:3
 Lurking shadows
12:48:51 
Again today Doodle Dragon ToT
 Doodle Dragon
12:48:14 He/They pronouns
Also, helloo! :D
 Doodle Dragon
12:48:06 He/They pronouns
Paws?

-WP Click-
 Wild Runners
12:48:02 Stalking chat
Actually that coat as axanthic don't look to bad
 Lurking shadows
12:47:13 
And she is 1 pound ToT
 Eye of Eternity
12:45:42 tern | they/he
bonsai
like wrestling and howling? theres no way to change that




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Critique?July 30, 2018 05:59 AM


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I was just messing around and I made this:
https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png
And this:
https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png
If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background
I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie
Critique?July 30, 2018 02:36 PM


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Horse
I can't see it
But the D ring for your bit is way too big
And the rest of the bridle is way to small
Critique?July 30, 2018 02:46 PM


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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.
https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or
https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png
(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:
Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:
https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.
There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°
Critique?July 30, 2018 03:58 PM


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Thanks Astro and Midnight!
The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black
I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.
I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD
Critique?July 30, 2018 06:33 PM


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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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