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 The Reaper
11:21:35 Reaper / Grim
Daisy
Are you okay?
 The Reaper
11:21:12 Reaper / Grim
Purge
My brain switched a couple words and went "what-?!" All three rhymed and then I laughed about it. I'm a fatass who's too scared to go to the gym, not offended XD
 Lackadaisy
11:20:48 Stray ( He/Him )
Purge,

I've been crying for hours, and that just snapped me out of it. That was fucking hilarious.
 Zeraphia
11:20:38 Sickly Vah
Imagine being able to eat questionable food and not worry about it.

.>.

Or food in general
 Purgatory
11:19:49 Purgatorio/Purge
I hope no one took that offensively, sorry-
 Purgatory
11:18:24 Purgatorio/Purge
I'm a gym nut so to me it just sounds like a post-cut depression meal
 Continental Wolves
11:18:14 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
Purge
You lost me at chocolate sauce but the rest sounds so good
 Nevermore.
11:17:53 Never/Nev
That just sounds nasty T.T Reminds me of some of the food trucks in my area for events. Some questionable food on the menus for sure.
 The Reaper
11:16:44 Reaper / Grim
Purge
That sounds fucking awesome
 Purgatory
11:16:19 Purgatorio/Purge
Emmet
I just went to a NewYears celebration fair and one foodtruck's "main dishe" was bacon wrapped fried chicken sandwich on donut buns with a chocolate sauce to dip it in dude. No joke. People fed it to their kids...
 Frozen Mist
11:15:18 Frozen - Mist
I don't think is west coast state livers know what healthy food is either. XD
 Zeraphia
11:15:09 Sickly Vah
Murica yeehaw
 Continental Wolves
11:15:05 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
I literally made sugar cookies for breakfast yesterday and ate half by myself...
 Boeing
11:13:57 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Not going to lie that's the most sugary thing I've ever seen lmao
Not American raaah
 The Reaper
11:13:40 Reaper / Grim
Southerners unite!
 Continental Wolves
11:12:56 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
Purge
Im also American and live in the south, we dont know the concept of healthy food
 The Reaper
11:12:03 Reaper / Grim
Emmet
:O That sounds awesome!!!
 Continental Wolves
11:11:17 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
Reaper
The only sugary part really is the icing unless you get certain types of fillings and I wouldn't call it dense but it can be dry if its not made right, can be kind of like from scratch cinnamon rolls
 Zeraphia
11:11:11 Sickly Vah
Never

XD definitely not perfection but thank you! :3
 Purgatory
11:11:07 Purgatorio/Purge
That looks healthy compared to the foods in my local stores. (I'm American)

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Critique please!November 11, 2020 04:58 PM


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Exactly what the title says, critique away!
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Edited at November 11, 2020 04:59 PM by Flower Field
Critique please!November 11, 2020 05:46 PM


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They lookin' mighty thick 0///0
Critique please!November 11, 2020 06:52 PM


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Lol they are thicc but gotta love that qwq
I am not a artist but for the one on the left, I think its face needs to be a bit longer like the one on the right because rats (and mice) tend to have longer faces and noses that stick out like buttons ^^
Maybe work on the toes a little if this is a comm?
Otherwise that is so cute and gorgeous! Love your style <3

Edited at November 11, 2020 06:53 PM by Crescents
Critique please!November 11, 2020 06:56 PM


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oh god

thicc rats are just what i needed

uhh tails look a bit short, I would make them just a touch longer. the noses should stick out a little more too
Critique please!November 11, 2020 06:57 PM


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I y o i n k
Critique please!November 11, 2020 07:48 PM


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I didn't even notice how thick they are at first XD
Yeah, the toes are really annoying to draw but it's not a comm so we good.

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