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"count" is what I meant.
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I don't pay attention to my paws account
 Leo
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The feeling of your paws count has gone down since yesterday o.o
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besides I still need to make actual dinner to eat
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If Violet can't have any of the chocolate chip cupcakes I made, then you can't either
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Fei
It's only if I get there XD might make waffles later though
Oh so thats how I summon you Amy XD just talk about food
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I heard cupcakes o.o

Fei i want one
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lol Let me how they go
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Aw 🥲
Lmao I'll just go make my own😂
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Violet
Not getting any of mine that I made
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Fei
Fair but nothing wrong with chocolate chip cupcakes for dinner XD
Man I really want some now XD
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Violet
Normally I would be having dinner not baking choc chip cupcakes XD
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Haha but whoose complaining about a fun detour XD
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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

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Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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