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8 wolves at risk and I don't wanna lose any of them :')
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death day today :D hoping a bunch of brats i dont care about go, and the ones i do care about stay :')
 Feiella
04:12:09 Pack of Sharp Snap
huh heatwave until the 31st of January
 The Reaper
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Marsh
That's adorable!
 starmutt
03:49:06 marsh | they/it
love her mwah -Click-
 VioletEcho
03:45:10 Is a dinosaur rawr
It’s like a universal struggle at this point
 SpiritGuardian
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): i chose too light of a font
 The Reaper
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Story of my life right there
 VioletEcho
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Grim
Lmao it's okay🥲


I need to go off and start learning but I don't want to ;-;
 The Reaper
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Sorry Vi XD
 VioletEcho
03:23:56 Is a dinosaur rawr
I saw fries mentioned- I want fries now :0
 The Reaper
03:20:22 Reaper / Grim
Slay
 Eternity
03:17:05 ET
It's okay the group section was very short and me n this guy I've never met just talked about Plague Inc
 Eternity
03:16:42 ET
SpiritGuardian
Switch places-- to your crazy country--
No thank you </3
I refuse to embrace instant tea
 The Reaper
03:15:25 Reaper / Grim
Fuck it, asleep roommate or not I'm making french fries
 The Reaper
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ET
Regretfully not and that sucks-
 SpiritGuardian
03:11:45 Mr Palette Guy
ET, not the group work D:
 SpiritGuardian
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Ah never mind
 Eternity
03:10:43 ET
Guys I have to do group work on an online call can someone shut off my internet

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 Melancholy
04:33:08 
8 wolves at risk and I don't wanna lose any of them :')
 Melancholy
04:16:35 
-WP Click-

:D
 Caeruleum
04:15:06 Cae, Blue
death day today :D hoping a bunch of brats i dont care about go, and the ones i do care about stay :')
 Feiella
04:12:09 Pack of Sharp Snap
huh heatwave until the 31st of January
 The Reaper
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Marsh
That's adorable!
 starmutt
03:49:06 marsh | they/it
love her mwah -Click-
 VioletEcho
03:45:10 Is a dinosaur rawr
It’s like a universal struggle at this point
 SpiritGuardian
03:42:42 Mr Palette Guy
): i chose too light of a font
 The Reaper
03:37:57 Reaper / Grim
Story of my life right there
 VioletEcho
03:32:54 Is a dinosaur rawr
Grim
Lmao it's okay🥲


I need to go off and start learning but I don't want to ;-;
 The Reaper
03:26:16 Reaper / Grim
Sorry Vi XD
 VioletEcho
03:23:56 Is a dinosaur rawr
I saw fries mentioned- I want fries now :0
 The Reaper
03:20:22 Reaper / Grim
Slay
 Eternity
03:17:05 ET
It's okay the group section was very short and me n this guy I've never met just talked about Plague Inc
 Eternity
03:16:42 ET
SpiritGuardian
Switch places-- to your crazy country--
No thank you </3
I refuse to embrace instant tea
 The Reaper
03:15:25 Reaper / Grim
Fuck it, asleep roommate or not I'm making french fries
 The Reaper
03:12:09 Reaper / Grim
ET
Regretfully not and that sucks-
 SpiritGuardian
03:11:45 Mr Palette Guy
ET, not the group work D:
 SpiritGuardian
03:11:02 Mr Palette Guy
Ah never mind
 Eternity
03:10:43 ET
Guys I have to do group work on an online call can someone shut off my internet




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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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