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I believe I've fixed it now, at least the singing and math/english thing. If I still need to work on the backstory, just let me know- I wasn't really sure what I wanted it to be so I just went with whatever first came to mind lol Feralhearted said: Hey Over, . Just a few things to note: - Math and enligh are not really things... Books were destroyed when the heavens fell and humanoid civilization was eliminated. The wolves that remain are gifted due to the remaining magic, but still, in essence, are just wolves. - Singing. Wolves will howl, but the can't "sing" per say. - How long was her Between? Most adults can survive in Between for maybe a year, but any more than that causes them to a)get killed by a monster or natural desaster, or b) go insane due to the chaotic energy of Between and end up getting killed. Apache would have needed a guardian as he is way to young to survive out there alone unless he took shelter with another Ruin for some of that time. . Please make these changes and let me know when i need to look again. . Feral
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TRhat looks better. Thank you. . Accepted Over
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Edited at December 31, 2021 12:17 PM by Feralhearted
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