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Eye
Well 2 has to make sure the rocket works and if everything goes well that'll be when we land there. This mission just goes all around then straight home and takes 10 days. Kinda like Apollo 9 or 10

Eye of Eternity

06:09:52 tern | they/he

nrc
really?? apparently the first moon landing was a 4 day trip?

Night Raven College

06:09:39 NRC/Raven

Well not hate just have a fear...

Serpents

06:08:48 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for a rp pm me

Night Raven College

06:08:45 NRC/Raven

Even though I hate space🙃

Night Raven College

06:08:29 NRC/Raven

Tern
Yeah it does

Eye of Eternity

06:08:07 tern | they/he

eve
2028?? surely it doesn't take that long to get to the moon??

Night Raven College

06:08:03 NRC/Raven

We talking about the Space ship?

SixBears

06:07:35 evebot

If the missions go well, they are supposed to land on the moon in 2028.

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Night Raven College

06:15:14 NRC/Raven

But it's not as bad now.

Night Raven College

06:14:26 NRC/Raven

Space has always scared me as a kid and I don't even know why.

Eye of Eternity

06:14:14 tern | they/he

moonfall
huh thats cool :0

Moonfall

06:13:41 Many moons, one me

Aeronautics and astronomy (not astrology, never that) is one of my special intrests

Moonfall

06:12:19 Many moons, one me

Eye
Pretty much

Night Raven College

06:12:16 NRC/Raven

So don't listen to me for this stuff..

Night Raven College

06:12:01 NRC/Raven

When it comes to space I'm not the brightest

Eye of Eternity

06:11:29 tern | they/he

moonfall
ohhh so theyre not spending two years up there this is just a test run trip
gotcha

Moonfall

06:11:22 Many moons, one me

Summary: 3 is landing, 2 is test and teasing the astronauts, and 1 is testing the systems unmanned

Serpents

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-WP Click- names pm me

Night Raven College

06:10:10 NRC/Raven

I'm just going off what Eve said

Moonfall

06:10:04 Many moons, one me

Eye of Eternity

06:09:52 tern | they/he

nrc
really?? apparently the first moon landing was a 4 day trip?

Night Raven College

06:09:39 NRC/Raven

Well not hate just have a fear...

Serpents

06:08:48 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for a rp pm me

Night Raven College

06:08:45 NRC/Raven

Even though I hate space🙃

Night Raven College

06:08:29 NRC/Raven

Tern
Yeah it does

Eye of Eternity

06:08:07 tern | they/he

eve
2028?? surely it doesn't take that long to get to the moon??

Night Raven College

06:08:03 NRC/Raven

We talking about the Space ship?

SixBears

06:07:35 evebot

If the missions go well, they are supposed to land on the moon in 2028.

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

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July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

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July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the squirrelabove. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see grstuff cheeks things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

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July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

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July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Grstuff cheeks Job!

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