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 Owlstar
10:49:13 tiger\Owl|she\her
Yeah. Soon I’ll probably have to fix it again
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Harry looks like he knows what he did, had a great time and would definitely do it again
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His name is Harry. -Click-
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yEs
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thank you for the CP Raven
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Do y’all wanna see ma little cat chat? Super cute by the way
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Yay!! Just got it
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thank you, she's pretty but the talent count is killing me
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10:42:30 a rock in your shoe
owl
I, as a crocheteteer, would just give up
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Jeez, watching all my moneys disappear is devastating. But The den expansion was worth it
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-Click-
This is what I’m trying to untangle right now. And my cat has decided to go play with it
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10:36:35 tiger\Owl|she\her
-WP Click-
Bred her with my dark fallow and waiting eagerly for her to pop
 Owlstar
10:35:11 tiger\Owl|she\her
Kinda pretty with some decent vitals
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SouthernScorpion
Pretty wolf
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march 23, this year? as in, 8 days ago??
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-WP Click-
 Vax
10:33:31 a rock in your shoe
they haven't been on since march 23, I'm sure their account will be deleted due to inactivity in a month or so (?)
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10:33:27 Scorpion
okay so my chat is just being odd
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 Owlstar
10:49:13 tiger\Owl|she\her
Yeah. Soon I’ll probably have to fix it again
 Moonfall
10:48:36 Many moons, one me
Owl
Harry looks like he knows what he did, had a great time and would definitely do it again
 Owlstar
10:46:23 tiger\Owl|she\her
His name is Harry. -Click-
 Vax
10:45:16 a rock in your shoe
owl
yEs
 SouthernScorpion
10:44:43 Scorpion
thank you for the CP Raven
 Owlstar
10:44:41 tiger\Owl|she\her
Do y’all wanna see ma little cat chat? Super cute by the way
 Owlstar
10:43:16 tiger\Owl|she\her
Yay!! Just got it
 SouthernScorpion
10:42:48 Scorpion
thank you, she's pretty but the talent count is killing me
 Vax
10:42:30 a rock in your shoe
owl
I, as a crocheteteer, would just give up
 MoonMoon
10:41:13 Moonie
Jeez, watching all my moneys disappear is devastating. But The den expansion was worth it
 Owlstar
10:38:50 tiger\Owl|she\her
-Click-
This is what I’m trying to untangle right now. And my cat has decided to go play with it
 Vax
10:37:26 a rock in your shoe
caesar
I can't do math
 Owlstar
10:36:35 tiger\Owl|she\her
-WP Click-
Bred her with my dark fallow and waiting eagerly for her to pop
 Owlstar
10:35:11 tiger\Owl|she\her
Kinda pretty with some decent vitals
 Tartarus
10:34:32 Husky
SouthernScorpion
Pretty wolf
 Caeruleum
10:34:25 Caesar
march 23, this year? as in, 8 days ago??
 SouthernScorpion
10:33:50 Scorpion
-WP Click-
 Vax
10:33:31 a rock in your shoe
they haven't been on since march 23, I'm sure their account will be deleted due to inactivity in a month or so (?)
 SouthernScorpion
10:33:27 Scorpion
okay so my chat is just being odd
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10:33:15 Sirens Alluring
Vax
lol




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Critique?August 8, 2018 02:05 PM


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I'm looking for a critique on this. I made the character for Cun :p
I'm looking for critiques on mostly anatomy, but coloring as well.

https://s15.postimg.cc/p5ekn64l5/sketch1533754368467.png

Edited at August 8, 2018 04:01 PM by Wolf~Song
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:08 PM


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The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:10 PM


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Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

Thank you! This is super helpful because I didn't notice that! I'll use more references next time :3
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:13 PM


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Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:15 PM


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Dragon’s Den said:



Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.

I will next time! Thanks! I just started drawing big cats, so proportions are difficult. She's supposed to be a short and stumpy muscular character, so I did draw the large legs on purpose.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:33 PM


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Wolf~Song said:


Dragon’s Den said:



Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.

I will next time! Thanks! I just started drawing big cats, so proportions are difficult. She's supposed to be a short and stumpy muscular character, so I did draw the large legs on purpose.

Makes sense to me! Good job on the art tho, I suck at cats.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:34 PM


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Dragon’s Den said:


Wolf~Song said:


Dragon’s Den said:



Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.

I will next time! Thanks! I just started drawing big cats, so proportions are difficult. She's supposed to be a short and stumpy muscular character, so I did draw the large legs on purpose.

Makes sense to me! Good job on the art tho, I suck at cats.

Thank you! I really appreciate it. I can hardly do domestic cats, so I feel you XD
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:42 PM


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Overall I think you did a good job. c:
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:45 PM


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Cún. said:
Overall I think you did a good job. c:

Thanks! ^.^

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