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hi there, new stalker calmly sliding in~ |
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catharcist said:
new oc check
If this is a wolf, I think the back is slopped too steeply, and the color and lines blend too much so you can't see where the legs differentiate from the body After staring at it, I could see it more than I thought I could |
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Sir Froggington said:
catharcist said:
new oc check
If this is a wolf, I think the back is slopped too steeply, and the color and lines blend too much so you can't see where the legs differentiate from the body
the character has a sloped back, so that is part of him! and admittedly, yes, i did make the pelt a little too dark, but it looked a lot lighter in production, colour theory. |
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Edited at July 26, 2023 11:02 PM by Serenity
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LegendarySS said:
Only doing this because you asked. Please know that I like your art, it just.. could improve a tiny bit. 1) Too pixelly. I have to zoom in to avoid the pixels. Could be my device though. 2) could be blended better - Exhibit A (pic #1 on the neck) 3) Where is your variety??? I see a lot of wolves, cats, and antlers. What else can you draw? Drawing the same thing over and over again will not help you draw other things better; you will only improve in drawing those things if even that! Also, I have no clue what Critique means for sure, so let me know please if I misunderstood the assignment. 💀
i think that may be your device, though if you are talking about the lineart, that is just a brush i use. yeah i get the blending one i really need to get better at it >.> i can draw mustelids, capra, pretty much anything if i put my mind to it, however my examples of that i'm not currently comfortable putting on this site. |
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I need to get some pieces from you! Your such a good artist. a little more practice and you could be a amazing artist on here like ET and OWO |
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You're already an amazing artist ^^ I'd say progress at your own pace and wuht you're comfortable with, I have no critique to offer <3 |
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you have an awesome gallery & lovely styles! i will have to lookout for when or if your comms open. <3 as for critique, dont be afraid to mess with bold lighting to really bring a character out and make the drawing look a little less flat. also, i found that using thinner lines has helped me make characters look a little more flexible ??? i dont really know how to explain it but i can pm you of you want some examples lol |
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My favorite one of these. #187636 is lucky to have such a nice art piece by you.
catharcist said:
done for #187636 for the "draw the oc above you" forum game
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