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Bug, a genderfluid R&J sounds so interesting! how was it?
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they're so fun! The one I went to taught us how to dance like them!
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yesss i went to one down in seattle and it was my first one outside the small ones they host at uni
veryy cool stuff
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i went to my first one last wednesday! I went to see genderfluid romeo and juliet and there was a mini dragshow before the play
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 Hades
11:30:03 The OG Ecifircas
Spookybeast, woah. Yeah, I'm not that blocked in with restaurant family. You win. My step-dad is a bartender though, if that's anything.

But right? Pains my heart but you have to do it. <|3 I did the irresponsible thing already and got a puppy when I shouldn't have and it was hell.

Collies? That's so cool. Such a pretty breed. Their heads throw me off though, lmao. But yes, feel free to collect me. I'd love to talk dogs. :D
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nooo she fled at really low health
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you trade it to the old lady in explore
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11:29:03 its yellow
another mother of grendel! and 5 bullfrogs...
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probably tradeable
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What is the golden horse figure?
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11:24:18 its yellow
yess i got her
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sorry what? "Mother Of Grendel 1 attempts to strike Noire [Obedient] but they ."
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Mother Of Grendel 1
400/400
Anhinga 2
finally a mother of grendel!!!
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11:22:28 Will
@Hades

My parents were in the kitchen, but my mom worked as a waitress too. I also have some honorary restaurant family from their time in the industry haha
And oh goodness 14 years T0T
She is so strong for that haha

Looking us being responsible
And ooh so tell me when you narrow down some ideas *^*

Yes!! He's really into rough collies and regularly shares things.
Mwahahaha I am collecting the dog people >:]
I'll definitely be running into your pms when I'm closer to getting puppy 👀
 Hades
11:03:52 The OG Ecifircas
Spookybeast, well, I appreciate it. We can cry into each other. But woah, I bet. Me too, though, actually! My mom has been a waitress for 14ish (??) years. e.e

But yeah, I feel you. I'm kind of the same. I could get another dog right now but it's really just not smart. I set myself some goals I have to meet before getting another dog and I really need to think hard about what breed I want next. <|3

But ack, that's so good. I'd love to meet more dog snobs here. I like talking to dog lovers but dog snobs are my people. Not to toot my own horn but the way you like snails, that's how I like dogs so if you ever have any questions, hit me up. xD
 Spookybeast
11:01:14 Will
@Hades
Well you listened to me wallowing, it's only fair I do the same lmao. My family is a big time restaurant industry family, so I've heard some wild stuff 😂

I know I'm so sad ;;
I'm hoping by the time I graduate, have a steady job, etc. I'll be able to get one. And omg you bet I would share so many pictures ToT
I have a friend here who's trying to get into dog showing, @Poot! He's honestly so knowledgeable on so much. My life saved for all things pup related
 Hades
10:57:48 The OG Ecifircas
Spookybeast, ugh. I'm glad. I was hoping I didn't come off patronizing earlier or like I was ranting at you. Hate when people just stress vomit all over you, haha.

What?! That's *so* sad. Like so so so sad. It's super mature and responsible of you to realize that and honestly, raising a wellbred puppy on no money isn't fun anyway. You get this cool dog and then you can't enter them in any sports/events because you're flat broke on just dog food at the dog! It's super unfortunate your plans are pushed back though. A bit selfishly, I was excited for seeing semi-regular well-bred Poodle content here on WP. :(
 Spookybeast
10:55:00 Will
@Hades

No it's totally fine dude!
I like being able to talk to other people who are/were in the industry
Makes me feel less alone lmao

Yes!
Unfortunately I had some recent expenses this past year, especially with being out of work for summer and now needing to figure out something to replace that. I am nannying part time, and looking at internships though!
It's just delayed any puppy plans :'>
I don't want to get one when I feel finances may be rocky

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Critique my Art ^^February 2, 2019 09:45 AM


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Deja Vu said:
Well my favorite part about your art is that it's so unique. I would keep most of your style, but maybe tweak a few things.

I agree with mavi, I think you should make fur and shadows more prominent! Maybe experiment with lighting too. I've found that lighting can definitely make a piece a ton better. If the sun is behind the characters, add a brim of light around their fur.

Use references when practicing! It's the only way to improve your anatomy. I know for me whenever I'm stuck between styles ,I get a bunch of pictures of a bunch of animals and just doodle a bunch of em. Some realistic things can transfer over to your current art style. Don't forget to credit though. ;')

Last thing, regularly practice realism! It's will really help with everything, I promise.

All that being said, you're one of my favorite artists. Hope this helps !



Thank you so so much! The last comment means a lot coming from you as you're one of my favourites. <3

I'll make sure to practise with the tips you gave me! Thanks so much again!
Critique my Art ^^February 2, 2019 09:51 AM


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ASomeonePerson said:
You've improved greatly since you've started posting your art in the Art Gallery, and the drawing you made for me of Ezhno was very beautiful, but I've noticed that you're beginning to struggle with drawing, and, even though I'm not an artist, I have some tips to help you improve:

1 Study the anatomy of what you are drawing. Since you typically draw canines, I'd suggest you study the entire (note, the entire) anatomy of a canine. Study the bone structure, the muscles, the skin, and the way the fur covers the body. Specifically, learn the skeletal system and the muscular system since these are the most important.

2 Experiment with different brushes with every drawing and see what suits it best. I've learned over the past few days of studying, most artists use five or six, if not only two or one, brushes to make the most perfect masterpieces, so keep the number of brushes you use to a minimum and experiment during beginning sketches.

3 Go to fellow artists and learn their techniques. I recommend checking out a user known as "Chickenbusiness" on DeviantArt. She has a Free Resources tab where you can see her techniques. Here's the link to that page: https://www.deviantart.com/chickenbusiness/gallery/42525407/Resources




Edited at February 2, 2019 09:51 AM by ASomeonePerson
Critique my Art ^^February 2, 2019 09:54 AM


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ASomeonePerson said:
You've improved greatly since you've started posting your art in the Art Gallery, and the drawing you made for me of Ezhno was very beautiful, but I've noticed that you're beginning to struggle with drawing, and, even though I'm not an artist, I have some tips to help you improve:

1 Study the anatomy of what you are drawing. Since you typically draw canines, I'd suggest you study the entire (note, the entire) anatomy of a canine. Study the bone structure, the muscles, the skin, and the way the fur covers the body. Specifically, learn the skeletal system and the muscular system since these are the most important.

2 Experiment with different brushes with every drawing and see what suits it best. I've learned over the past few days of studying, most artists use five or six, if not only two or one, brushes to make the most perfect masterpieces, so keep the number of brushes you use to a minimum and experiment during beginning sketches.

3 Go to fellow artists and learn their techniques. I recommend checking out a user known as "Chickenbusiness" on DeviantArt. She has a Free Resources tab where you can see her techniques. Here's the link to that page: https://www.deviantart.com/chickenbusiness/gallery/42525407/Resources


I am so so sorry I didn't see this!! ;n;

Thank you very much! Those tips are greatly appreciated. I have a doggo at home and I'll study her closely, and i'll study other woofers, too ^^

I'll definitely check Chickenbusiness out!! Thanks again!<3
Critique my Art ^^February 2, 2019 01:13 PM


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I don't really know what to say, because you already know how much I adore your work.

I agree with a few people here about the snouts, but it isn't a very large problem in my eyes! I believe they suit your style.

And I just have another small thing. Sometimes your leg bends awkwardly, but it isn't like always? I have that problem myself with poses etc, so I wouldn't worry about it. Practise makes perfect, as you've already said lmao.

All in all I love you & your art oof.

Edited at February 2, 2019 01:13 PM by Xeno
Critique my Art ^^February 2, 2019 01:15 PM


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Xeno said:
I don't really know what to say, because you already know how much I adore your work.

I agree with a few people here about the snouts, but it isn't a very large problem in my eyes! I believe they suit your style.

And I just have another small thing. Sometimes your leg bends awkwardly, but it isn't like always? I have that problem myself with poses etc, so I wouldn't worry about it. Practise makes perfect, as you've already said lmao.

All in all I love you & your art oof.


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