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I'm bored and I love helping people, so in between commissions I'd love to help people correct their lines and give advice/critique.
I'm still a learner and I'm far from a professional artist so I don't know how this'll go.. :u
Just post down below with your art and such and I'll do my best to get back to you and offer corrections/advice/critique etc.. :)
I may/will be a little harsh on the critique. c:
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just finished this for someone.
https://i.imgsafe.org/7e/7e1ca5f3f2.png
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overall I think it's a really cute piece! I can see your style coming along nicely. However, there are a few things I would change.
https://s22.postimg.cc/qau6rqjqp/1534588603291.png Here I've given you a rough redline of how the kitty's body should look. Remember that an animal's face is just about symmetrical. Their eyes are both in the same place and their ears are the same size. Don't forget that floof c:
I feel like the front legs are a bit too spaced apart and the chest is a bit wide. I've drawn a guide on where the front leg should be. I know I sound nit-picky but animal paws have four toes. Try to remember that c:
As well as that the back legs are bending completely wrong. The hind left leg is twisting over as if it is broken :'D the guide I drew was rushed and I went a bit wonky on the back legs too, apologies. ^^'
I hope that helps. As I've said before it's an overall lovely piece. Keep practising! I can see your style forming! ^0^
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Thankz <3 its a lot of help!
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Oof.. I need help Xd http://i66.tinypic.com/65skk9.jpg Thanks for making this thread!
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Heck im posting a crappy drawing in :D Please.. help me lol https://s33.postimg.cc/uxp2a5o5b/7_F850_D40-9_CAE-4110-_A622-_CA773_A64035_D.jpg Edited at August 18, 2018 11:47 AM by Epoch
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That's a cute little piece you've got there. c:
https://s33.postimg.cc/ojzz74ogv/1534607305694.png
Here's the basic redline. It's pretty messy :'D I recommend not using massive circles to draw heads. It makes them bigger than they need to be. I've noticed you rely too much on circles in your drawings and tend to make the heads the main point of the drawing, which ends up with a tiny body.
I'd also recommend taking a look at some canine pictures for reference. Draw some lines over the joints and such and see how the body moves. Just make sure you're using stock. c:
Keep practising and you'll soon be brilliant!
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Oof that's epic! Let me give it a try :3
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<3 Edited at August 19, 2018 08:42 AM by Robin XD
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lel i am going to be using this so much XD
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