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Guys- question. When you breed to someone else's female, do the pups get sent to you automatically or does the pack you bought out the breeding from keep them?
 Hades
06:52:14 The OG Ecifircas
Black Swan, what are you doing here? :0 (It's Ecifircas.)
 devine
06:52:00 vi, devi
Malcuth
Congratulations! That's so happy!
 devine
06:51:41 vi, devi
Enigma!
Hey there! Long time no see! I'm alive and accounted for so I can't complain. How about you?
 Mirko
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Malcuth
Congrats!!
 Malcuth
06:50:55 Wander
My nephew was just born, 7.12lbs 😭
 Enigma
06:50:44 
Oh my god it's dev

Happy to see you! How've you been
 TheFlyingKitten
06:50:33 Petri Dish/Sorceress
-WP Click-

What should I name this ding-dong?
 Rogue Turkey
06:49:17 Rogue is a Ghost
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 The Night Walker
06:48:47 Anemoia/Aedra PS4Usr
Tonne
Their dog is named batman xD
 devine
06:48:33 vi, devi
ha those are good names
My three chickens are "Soul Snatcher", "Mystery Colon" and "Aye-aye Kevin"
I had one named Chip but I she spends half her time with my neighbor's chickens
 TheFlyingKitten
06:48:04 Petri Dish/Sorceress
@Night

I love that.
 Tonneoshet
06:48:02 Tony - Neo - Bug
@Aedra
Bahaha! That's so random xD
Our old neighbours used to have Flash and Batman.

Flash was named that purely because she was the first to go running for food
 The Night Walker
06:46:57 Anemoia/Aedra PS4Usr
My friend has a chicken named pigeon. And another called galvanized steel.
 Tonneoshet
06:44:23 Tony - Neo - Bug
Bahaha. Its probably not as bad as it sounds since my countries currency is worth less than places overseas
 TheFlyingKitten
06:43:29 Petri Dish/Sorceress
@Tony

Oh, good lord.
 Magnus Bane
06:43:14 Mag/Maggy
950 is highway robbery
 Boeing
06:42:57 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Tonneo
been busy for the whole morning and I have a recital in the evening, but I'm on now lol
 Tonneoshet
06:42:22 Tony - Neo - Bug
BOE!!! Hello! :D
 Boeing
06:42:00 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
finally not-busy
Hi Tonneo :D

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Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:14 AM


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I'm bored and I love helping people, so in between commissions I'd love to help people correct their lines and give advice/critique.

I'm still a learner and I'm far from a professional artist so I don't know how this'll go.. :u

Just post down below with your art and such and I'll do my best to get back to you and offer corrections/advice/critique etc.. :)

I may/will be a little harsh on the critique. c:
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:33 AM


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just finished this for someone.

https://i.imgsafe.org/7e/7e1ca5f3f2.png
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:43 AM


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Robin XD -

overall I think it's a really cute piece! I can see your style coming along nicely. However, there are a few things I would change.

https://s22.postimg.cc/qau6rqjqp/1534588603291.png
Here I've given you a rough redline of how the kitty's body should look. Remember that an animal's face is just about symmetrical. Their eyes are both in the same place and their ears are the same size. Don't forget that floof c:

I feel like the front legs are a bit too spaced apart and the chest is a bit wide. I've drawn a guide on where the front leg should be. I know I sound nit-picky but animal paws have four toes. Try to remember that c:

As well as that the back legs are bending completely wrong. The hind left leg is twisting over as if it is broken :'D the guide I drew was rushed and I went a bit wonky on the back legs too, apologies. ^^'

I hope that helps. As I've said before it's an overall lovely piece. Keep practising! I can see your style forming! ^0^
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:49 AM


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Thankz <3 its a lot of help!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:44 AM


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Oof.. I need help Xd
http://i66.tinypic.com/65skk9.jpg
Thanks for making this thread!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:45 AM


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Heck im posting a crappy drawing in :D
Please.. help me lol
https://s33.postimg.cc/uxp2a5o5b/7_F850_D40-9_CAE-4110-_A622-_CA773_A64035_D.jpg

Edited at August 18, 2018 11:47 AM by Epoch
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:52 AM


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Twilight Moon -

That's a cute little piece you've got there. c:

https://s33.postimg.cc/ojzz74ogv/1534607305694.png

Here's the basic redline. It's pretty messy :'D
I recommend not using massive circles to draw heads. It makes them bigger than they need to be. I've noticed you rely too much on circles in your drawings and tend to make the heads the main point of the drawing, which ends up with a tiny body.

I'd also recommend taking a look at some canine pictures for reference. Draw some lines over the joints and such and see how the body moves. Just make sure you're using stock. c:

Keep practising and you'll soon be brilliant!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 03:33 PM


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Oof that's epic!
Let me give it a try :3
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 09:02 PM


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<3

Edited at August 19, 2018 08:42 AM by Robin XD
Free Line CorrectionAugust 19, 2018 08:41 AM


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lel i am going to be using this so much XD

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