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07:55:29 The OG Ecifircas

Obscurity, it's so hard to see the difference between player / mod colors on this palette and for a second, I thought you lost your green hat. <|3

Nirvana_Sky

07:55:24 Vana

Belljake
Ah. I have no idea what that is.
But I just had a vision of the title of my idea.
"Rudolph the red nose went down in history"

Obscurity

07:54:31 Tai

I am remembering once again, why I gave up trying to code my own palette

MLadySkylar

07:54:22 P'Sky

Petry
Admirable
That's usually what I do,
If my girl sees my stressed and upset she starts crying so I just have my mental breakdowns at work and then keep pushing

TheFlyingKitten

07:53:13 Petri Dish/Sorceress

@Sky

I just try to push the bad stuff to the side. It's unhealthy as fuck, pretending bad shit isn't happening, but it keeps me as emotionally stable as a person in my situation can be.

BellJake

07:51:46 Don't call me BJ.

@Nirvana_Sky
LOL, I love that, need to make a YCH though

MLadySkylar

07:51:40 P'Sky

Petry
I've had a string of lows, like I'm barely holding on by a thread.
This election and the death of my cat has me banging my head against the wall,
We need something good to happen

Voxtexy

07:51:17 Vox

It'd be okay if they were in the trailers and teasers but they haven't been :'D

Nirvana_Sky

07:50:59 Vana

BellJake
Rudolph eating all the other reindeer and Santa in absolute terrified

Voxtexy

07:50:55 Vox

Dammit to hell.

I was trying to get some nice HD gifs that people made from trailers and spoiled a character's appearance for myself lmaoo

BellJake

07:50:54 Don't call me BJ.

@MLadySkylar
love the idea, but I need something for a YCH, any ideas?

Luna🍂

07:50:22 Silver (She/her)

Your wolves played: Starfall shivers in their den from the cold.
Starry, you have the highest blizzard vitals I have ever seen in my life you are fine

MLadySkylar

07:50:09 P'Sky

BellJake
Krampus or Grinch Gone mad.

My daughter asked me to draw her earlier,
I gave her a quick sketch in crayon, she loved it

TheFlyingKitten

07:50:03 Petri Dish/Sorceress

@Sky

Thank you. I've been pushing through, and I know you have to have lows before the highs come in, but sometimes it hurts knowing that. I'm the type of person who tries to help as much as I can and I get upset when there's nothing I can do.

Nirvana_Sky

07:49:48 Vana

I'm in shambles. Outer banks has ruined my teenage heart and I'm over it.

BellJake

07:49:15 Don't call me BJ.

christmas gore ideas?

Demon Mistress

07:48:45 The Scary Mod

@Enigma
I cant wait for season 2!

MLadySkylar

07:48:36 P'Sky

Petry
I'm so sorry for your loss <3
Good luck on the search!
With this crazy housing market

Hey Mag

Voxtexy

07:47:30 Vox

I'm actually going to rewatch Season 1 before I let myself watch the first act of Season 2. I'm both ready and not ready for this. The VAs have mentioned that they cried because of Season 2 ;^;

TheFlyingKitten

07:47:25 Petri Dish/Sorceress

@Sky

Oh, I'm so sorry. :(

I've been... getting by. I lost my great grandma two weeks before her 90th birthday. Now I'm stuck house hunting with my grandma for a more affordable place so we don't end up homeless.

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

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July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

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July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

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July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

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July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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