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 Magnus Bane
09:02:21 Mag/Maggy
Hello
 Boeing
09:01:56 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
everyone I have on my list of kiwis are from the north island 😔
 Tonneoshet
09:01:38 Tony - Neo - Bug
YES!!!!!
My man, you have all my respect
 Hades
09:01:23 
Now I want kiwis. :c
 Broken Archangel
09:01:11 Samael, Fallen, Arch
Tony northy XD
 Tonneoshet
09:00:41 Tony - Neo - Bug
@Samael
Most important question I have to ask you then.

You a northy or a southy
 Castiel
08:59:03 Cas (He/They)
Siku

I think a good portion of the US is having wildfires right now if I remember correct
 Broken Archangel
08:58:22 Samael, Fallen, Arch
Tony damn really XD
 Tonneoshet
08:58:06 Tony - Neo - Bug
WOAH NOW HANG ON--

You're a kiwi too!??? And I didn't know!???
 Boeing
08:58:01 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Tonneo
from what I know another NZer yeah XD
 Broken Archangel
08:57:41 Samael, Fallen, Arch
Tony yea nz XD
 Tonneoshet
08:57:27 Tony - Neo - Bug
Wha-?? Same time zone?
 Continental Wolves
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Broken
Hmm... I need to come up with a birthday gift then 🤔
 Broken Archangel
08:56:47 Samael, Fallen, Arch
Damn it in 200 mush shot I thought I had 200 in saving
 Broken Archangel
08:56:21 Samael, Fallen, Arch
Boe deffently dame time zone xD
 Boeing
08:55:53 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Ghost
you're in the same timezone as me so I won't accidentally miss it I'm pretty sure xD
I'll wish you one tomorrow lol
 Broken Archangel
08:55:41 Samael, Fallen, Arch
Ss thanks and ok I might get it then
 Stray Secrets
08:55:04 Stray.
dh hero for sure
happy early birthday
 Broken Archangel
08:54:53 Samael, Fallen, Arch
Boe yea XD the 9th XD
 Broken Archangel
08:54:39 Samael, Fallen, Arch
Thanks Tony 😊

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Critique?June 17, 2018 01:25 PM


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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png
Critique?June 17, 2018 01:30 PM


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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!
Critique?June 17, 2018 01:31 PM


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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!
Critique?June 17, 2018 01:39 PM


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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png
Critique?June 17, 2018 01:54 PM


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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!
Critique?June 21, 2018 05:37 PM


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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!
Critique?June 22, 2018 11:30 PM


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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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