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12:20:13

I'm thinking about it. She might. I gave her a name, so she's getting me attached now.

12:17:47 Spirit (Her/She)

Khaos
Will Ms. Pissy live?

12:16:54 Spirit (Her/She)

Khaos

The so-called, piss wolf, has the best vitals out of all three looks like.

12:16:16

Her new name is Pissy. The piss version of Missy.

12:15:07

Ew, I just looked. Is that a piss wolf??? The defect is cute though

12:15:05 Spirit (Her/She)

Khaos
Not terrible. Let me check vitals,

12:14:36

Lovely. :(

Continental Wolves

12:14:28 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Khaos
Duds

12:13:41

And because people have been skeptical, no, it's not a rickroll. I'm too lazy right now to go grab the link.

12:13:14

How is my luck decent enough to get a toucan feather when I need one?? Pup check? I don't want to check. :( -WP Click-

Continental Wolves

12:12:49 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Enigma
Yup, a little under 2 months away from 500 days in a row

12:11:33 Spirit (Her/She)

I completed a level in explore. Yay me. I haven't explored in a LONG time.

12:11:30

@Spoopy
Getting close to 500! Very impressive

12:04:03 📦

goodnight!

12:03:07 Cae, Blue

Ok, back to sleep i go. Good night~

Continental Wolves

12:02:44 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

You have logged in 447 days in a row.

12:02:22 Cae, Blue

There we go, it is winter

12:02:10 📦

Ah I forgot about that

12:01:55 Cae, Blue

That change lags a bit

12:01:35 📦

did it not change over to Winter 1??

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12:20:13

I'm thinking about it. She might. I gave her a name, so she's getting me attached now.

12:17:47 Spirit (Her/She)

Khaos
Will Ms. Pissy live?

12:16:54 Spirit (Her/She)

Khaos

The so-called, piss wolf, has the best vitals out of all three looks like.

12:16:16

Her new name is Pissy. The piss version of Missy.

12:15:07

Ew, I just looked. Is that a piss wolf??? The defect is cute though

12:15:05 Spirit (Her/She)

Khaos
Not terrible. Let me check vitals,

12:14:36

Lovely. :(

Continental Wolves

12:14:28 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Khaos
Duds

12:13:41

And because people have been skeptical, no, it's not a rickroll. I'm too lazy right now to go grab the link.

12:13:14

How is my luck decent enough to get a toucan feather when I need one?? Pup check? I don't want to check. :( -WP Click-

Continental Wolves

12:12:49 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Enigma
Yup, a little under 2 months away from 500 days in a row

12:11:33 Spirit (Her/She)

I completed a level in explore. Yay me. I haven't explored in a LONG time.

12:11:30

@Spoopy
Getting close to 500! Very impressive

12:04:03 📦

goodnight!

12:03:07 Cae, Blue

Ok, back to sleep i go. Good night~

Continental Wolves

12:02:44 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

You have logged in 447 days in a row.

12:02:22 Cae, Blue

There we go, it is winter

12:02:10 📦

Ah I forgot about that

12:01:55 Cae, Blue

That change lags a bit

12:01:35 📦

did it not change over to Winter 1??

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April 8, 2018 11:06 PM

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Heyo, so I need some critique on this ref sheet, I’ll be transferring it to a digital one soon. Please give some helpful hints, it’s greatl appreciated! Thanks!

https://image.ibb.co/f23q2H/03_C94_DF5_C542_427_A_A5_F3_164893_C2_C50_B.jpg

Edited at April 8, 2018 11:07 PM by Deja Vu

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April 8, 2018 11:10 PM

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Don't most reference sheets have tongue color? If not, sorry :L

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April 8, 2018 11:11 PM

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Enigma~Of~Fate said:
Don't most reference sheets have tongue color? If not, sorry :L

They do! Thanks, Ill add a mouth section

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April 8, 2018 11:11 PM

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Deja Vu said:

Enigma~Of~Fate said:
Don't most reference sheets have tongue color? If not, sorry :L

They do! Thanks, I’ll add a mouth section

No problem :)

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April 8, 2018 11:13 PM

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not trying to nitpick or anything; but the eyes do seem a bit small and the ears a bit wide.

besides that; i like it

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April 8, 2018 11:14 PM

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hell above said:
not trying to nitpick or anything; but the eyes do seem a bit small and the ears a bit wide.
besides that; i like it

Thanks ! Ill change that ^^

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April 8, 2018 11:14 PM

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you could add to the side the colors that you used.

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April 8, 2018 11:21 PM

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Lunar Moon said:
you could add to the side the colors that you used.

Thanks!

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April 8, 2018 11:33 PM

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The back legs bend a bit weird, but that's the only thing that really stands out to me. :)

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April 9, 2018 12:52 AM

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Deer said:
The back legs bend a bit weird, but that's the only thing that really stands out to me. :)

Oof, I see that now. Thanks!

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