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03:19:55 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Tired

03:07:01 Juicy Arm Boy

Bye wild !

03:06:55 Stalking chat

Bye chat

03:06:51 Juicy Arm Boy

Nrc
Wait what

03:06:42 Juicy Arm Boy

NRC
Nah they didn't TwT bye !

Night Raven College

03:06:24 NRC/Raven

Ok I'm gonna go back to going insane goodbye!

Night Raven College

03:06:03 NRC/Raven

/j

Night Raven College

03:05:56 NRC/Raven

Ever
Lol, they needed mush that much?

03:04:53 Stalking chat

Eyy we got Reggie and Baldie the ll

03:04:53 Juicy Arm Boy

NRC
Yeah :> it was mainly to these two people haha.

East MountainClan

03:04:03 Edith, Edie, Stella

Wild, this girl looks so much a wolf I had when starting my pack, I could cry.
She's staying forever, never selling her, nope.

03:03:44 Stalking chat

Gotta go do work never mind I'll gift people later :'D

Night Raven College

03:03:39 NRC/Raven

Ever
That's a lot of mushies

03:03:14 Juicy Arm Boy

Wild
I felt generous one day and I ended up giving away 80k mush man </3

03:02:36 Stalking chat

I feel oddly generous today..

03:02:19 Stalking chat

Edith,
your welcome :)

03:02:08 Juicy Arm Boy

Hell yeah 2.3k mush

Night Raven College

03:02:06 NRC/Raven

Why do I feel like my little stress ball is gonna break?

East MountainClan

03:01:41 Edith, Edie, Stella

0.0 Wild.. did you? omg, I could hug you

03:01:24 Stalking chat

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03:19:55 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Tired

03:07:01 Juicy Arm Boy

Bye wild !

03:06:55 Stalking chat

Bye chat

03:06:51 Juicy Arm Boy

Nrc
Wait what

03:06:42 Juicy Arm Boy

NRC
Nah they didn't TwT bye !

Night Raven College

03:06:24 NRC/Raven

Ok I'm gonna go back to going insane goodbye!

Night Raven College

03:06:03 NRC/Raven

/j

Night Raven College

03:05:56 NRC/Raven

Ever
Lol, they needed mush that much?

03:04:53 Stalking chat

Eyy we got Reggie and Baldie the ll

03:04:53 Juicy Arm Boy

NRC
Yeah :> it was mainly to these two people haha.

East MountainClan

03:04:03 Edith, Edie, Stella

Wild, this girl looks so much a wolf I had when starting my pack, I could cry.
She's staying forever, never selling her, nope.

03:03:44 Stalking chat

Gotta go do work never mind I'll gift people later :'D

Night Raven College

03:03:39 NRC/Raven

Ever
That's a lot of mushies

03:03:14 Juicy Arm Boy

Wild
I felt generous one day and I ended up giving away 80k mush man </3

03:02:36 Stalking chat

I feel oddly generous today..

03:02:19 Stalking chat

Edith,
your welcome :)

03:02:08 Juicy Arm Boy

Hell yeah 2.3k mush

Night Raven College

03:02:06 NRC/Raven

Why do I feel like my little stress ball is gonna break?

East MountainClan

03:01:41 Edith, Edie, Stella

0.0 Wild.. did you? omg, I could hug you

03:01:24 Stalking chat

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October 15, 2020 10:00 AM

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I need advice on how good this is because 
I don't know what to think I mean to me 
it looks bad and I should work more on 
it but then I think it's good and I 
should stop working on it.

before

after

How does this look?

Edited at October 15, 2020 02:37 PM by Rose_Petal

October 15, 2020 10:10 AM

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I can't click on the link.

October 15, 2020 10:10 AM

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link doesn't work..

October 15, 2020 10:11 AM

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I fixed the problem

Edited at October 15, 2020 10:24 AM by Rose_Petal

October 15, 2020 10:24 AM

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I like it, your art looks great!

October 15, 2020 10:24 AM

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the blood could use a little more detail

October 15, 2020 10:25 AM

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Work on two layers (: if your not already.

lineart on top, coloring below. If you Change the refrence layer on bucket to the lineart, fill should still work(:

and blur the blood(:

overall, pretty nice ^^ good job

October 15, 2020 10:25 AM

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It's really pretty. I like it.

October 15, 2020 10:27 AM

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If you know how, you could try adding some shading and hilight to give it some extra detail ^^

October 15, 2020 10:28 AM

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I don't know a lot about art but I really like it! In my opinion I think a little bit more detail on the blood around the mouth would be nice :)

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