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 Owlstar
08:58:07 tiger\Owl|she\her
its for keeper of the lost cities I'm going for slightly dark but pretty. he's gonna be my OCS mate. don't question. I wanted him to be a lil bit wildish too
 Eye of Eternity
08:57:03 tern | they/he
'tim the killer' just dealt me psychic damage get me out of here
 Eye of Eternity
08:56:06 tern | they/he
owlstar
depends on what kind of world/role you're going for, honestly
 Eye of Eternity
08:55:37 tern | they/he
ollie
the far back thigh looks a little thick? otherwise it looks awesome :0
 Owlstar
08:55:33 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- how do you all like this pelt idea for a male wolf In something? I have ha freehand base ready for him. can yall please respond. i want to know if he needs editing
 Eye of Eternity
08:54:33 tern | they/he
eer
its pretty fun and very very stressful when its not fun
i do too :3 theyre so fun

alright goodnight for whenever you head out ^^
 Faulty Demons
08:53:51 Ollie, Gold
Thoughts on this sketch? Anything look off?
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 Enthralled Poet
08:53:12 Asteroid, Poet
ever
lolll i usually use ice if its really bad
 EvergreenHills
08:52:44 Juicy Arm Boy
Asteroid
Awh that’s stupid. I’d rather have no blood in my foot than itchy ankles
 EvergreenHills
08:52:09 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Ooh walk sounds nice :D
Okay LOL
 Eye of Eternity
08:51:59 tern | they/he
petri
ill do it !! itll just take like three years /silly

goodnightt ^^
 Enthralled Poet
08:51:47 Asteroid, Poet
Ever
yeah its because blood flow is returning
 EvergreenHills
08:51:45 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Ooh fun :0 I’ve never actually worked on a play before but I love watching them <3

I’m gonna head out soon ;-; getting really sleepy haha
 Eye of Eternity
08:51:21 tern | they/he
eer
ooh drawing is always good though
if youve got nothing else planned going for a walk might be nice? the weathers so good now
oooh :00 if you do that ill snatch up your comms :3 (if i remember)
 TheFlyingKitten
08:51:20 Petri Dish/ENA Mum
Man, I think I'm getting sleepy. That and my computer is dying, it needs charge...

Alright, I'm gonna head to bed now, for real this time. Good night! <3
 EvergreenHills
08:50:22 Juicy Arm Boy
Do yall ever just take off your socks and because they were on all day your ankles like become itchy or something
 TheFlyingKitten
08:50:15 Petri Dish/ENA Mum
tern
I have to find someone to draw it, holy shit! We need art of this! XD

It will happen one way or another! >:D
 Ashallayn
08:50:09 Ash/Nawks
Hi! Asking, which map does the event enemies spawn the most? I haven't encountered even one from my gullin's quests RIP
 Eye of Eternity
08:49:55 tern | they/he
eer
of course :'3
yess i helped work on this one too! i get to see my beautiful camel daughter (she transitioned)! /silly
joseph and the technicolour dreamcoat :3
 EvergreenHills
08:49:23 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Eh. Might draw. I’ll probably just be online most of Saturday and the afternoon of friday. Maybe open my comms for more Mushies, but IRL nothing fun

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 Owlstar
08:58:07 tiger\Owl|she\her
its for keeper of the lost cities I'm going for slightly dark but pretty. he's gonna be my OCS mate. don't question. I wanted him to be a lil bit wildish too
 Eye of Eternity
08:57:03 tern | they/he
'tim the killer' just dealt me psychic damage get me out of here
 Eye of Eternity
08:56:06 tern | they/he
owlstar
depends on what kind of world/role you're going for, honestly
 Eye of Eternity
08:55:37 tern | they/he
ollie
the far back thigh looks a little thick? otherwise it looks awesome :0
 Owlstar
08:55:33 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- how do you all like this pelt idea for a male wolf In something? I have ha freehand base ready for him. can yall please respond. i want to know if he needs editing
 Eye of Eternity
08:54:33 tern | they/he
eer
its pretty fun and very very stressful when its not fun
i do too :3 theyre so fun

alright goodnight for whenever you head out ^^
 Faulty Demons
08:53:51 Ollie, Gold
Thoughts on this sketch? Anything look off?
-Click-
 Enthralled Poet
08:53:12 Asteroid, Poet
ever
lolll i usually use ice if its really bad
 EvergreenHills
08:52:44 Juicy Arm Boy
Asteroid
Awh that’s stupid. I’d rather have no blood in my foot than itchy ankles
 EvergreenHills
08:52:09 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Ooh walk sounds nice :D
Okay LOL
 Eye of Eternity
08:51:59 tern | they/he
petri
ill do it !! itll just take like three years /silly

goodnightt ^^
 Enthralled Poet
08:51:47 Asteroid, Poet
Ever
yeah its because blood flow is returning
 EvergreenHills
08:51:45 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Ooh fun :0 I’ve never actually worked on a play before but I love watching them <3

I’m gonna head out soon ;-; getting really sleepy haha
 Eye of Eternity
08:51:21 tern | they/he
eer
ooh drawing is always good though
if youve got nothing else planned going for a walk might be nice? the weathers so good now
oooh :00 if you do that ill snatch up your comms :3 (if i remember)
 TheFlyingKitten
08:51:20 Petri Dish/ENA Mum
Man, I think I'm getting sleepy. That and my computer is dying, it needs charge...

Alright, I'm gonna head to bed now, for real this time. Good night! <3
 EvergreenHills
08:50:22 Juicy Arm Boy
Do yall ever just take off your socks and because they were on all day your ankles like become itchy or something
 TheFlyingKitten
08:50:15 Petri Dish/ENA Mum
tern
I have to find someone to draw it, holy shit! We need art of this! XD

It will happen one way or another! >:D
 Ashallayn
08:50:09 Ash/Nawks
Hi! Asking, which map does the event enemies spawn the most? I haven't encountered even one from my gullin's quests RIP
 Eye of Eternity
08:49:55 tern | they/he
eer
of course :'3
yess i helped work on this one too! i get to see my beautiful camel daughter (she transitioned)! /silly
joseph and the technicolour dreamcoat :3
 EvergreenHills
08:49:23 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Eh. Might draw. I’ll probably just be online most of Saturday and the afternoon of friday. Maybe open my comms for more Mushies, but IRL nothing fun




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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

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Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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