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 TheFlyingKitten
10:38:47 Petri Dish/ENA Mum
Ah, I love unhinged Ao3 tags. UwU
 MLadySkylar
10:38:40 P'Sky/Sky-kun
It's on in the lip/teeth/tongue movement
 GreatestAxolotl
10:37:21 
I use my teeth to whistle
 Vax
10:33:34 a rock in your shoe
petri
oh
i can’t whistle ever
 TheFlyingKitten
10:33:04 Petri Dish/ENA Mum
Vax

No, I used to be able to! I now cannot!
 Vax
10:32:13 a rock in your shoe
petri
me neither
 SouthernScorpion
10:32:07 Scorpion
how do i use my relic to stagger dom?
 TheFlyingKitten
10:29:16 Petri Dish/ENA Mum
Chat, it's an emergency! I can't whistle! D:
 Oleander Kiss
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moon
thank you! I was so excited for them and it looks like it payed off!
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Oleander
They're gorgeous!!
 Oleander Kiss
10:20:51 Cervo
Moon
yeah! I just popper her! apparently i shouldve theatened her like 13 hours ago when she hit 80
 Moonfall
10:20:12 Many moons, one me
Oleander,
I think threatening worked, she's in labor when I clicked on her
 SouthernScorpion
10:15:53 Scorpion
messaged eve and evergreen, waiting on a response
 Xanthius
10:11:38 Xan
Ello chat
 Sikoa
10:08:35 
WP mods are very good
 Sikoa
10:07:14 
Evergreen is a mod and online
 Dagger Pack
10:07:03 Zuko/Legacy
Scorpion,

Oh, then you might want to message Eve. She is more likely able to do something about it
 SouthernScorpion
10:06:30 Scorpion
it involves real money so I'm mildly panicking
 Burning Roses
10:06:00 Your local therapist
Ah, they could be doing other things at the moment, I'm sure they'll get back to you soon
 Burning Roses
10:05:25 Your local therapist
It seems Evergreen is on at the moment, might be a good idea to PM them your issue

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 TheFlyingKitten
10:38:47 Petri Dish/ENA Mum
Ah, I love unhinged Ao3 tags. UwU
 MLadySkylar
10:38:40 P'Sky/Sky-kun
It's on in the lip/teeth/tongue movement
 GreatestAxolotl
10:37:21 
I use my teeth to whistle
 Vax
10:33:34 a rock in your shoe
petri
oh
i can’t whistle ever
 TheFlyingKitten
10:33:04 Petri Dish/ENA Mum
Vax

No, I used to be able to! I now cannot!
 Vax
10:32:13 a rock in your shoe
petri
me neither
 SouthernScorpion
10:32:07 Scorpion
how do i use my relic to stagger dom?
 TheFlyingKitten
10:29:16 Petri Dish/ENA Mum
Chat, it's an emergency! I can't whistle! D:
 Oleander Kiss
10:24:36 Cervo
moon
thank you! I was so excited for them and it looks like it payed off!
 Moonfall
10:22:10 Many moons, one me
Oleander
They're gorgeous!!
 Oleander Kiss
10:20:51 Cervo
Moon
yeah! I just popper her! apparently i shouldve theatened her like 13 hours ago when she hit 80
 Moonfall
10:20:12 Many moons, one me
Oleander,
I think threatening worked, she's in labor when I clicked on her
 SouthernScorpion
10:15:53 Scorpion
messaged eve and evergreen, waiting on a response
 Xanthius
10:11:38 Xan
Ello chat
 Sikoa
10:08:35 
WP mods are very good
 Sikoa
10:07:14 
Evergreen is a mod and online
 Dagger Pack
10:07:03 Zuko/Legacy
Scorpion,

Oh, then you might want to message Eve. She is more likely able to do something about it
 SouthernScorpion
10:06:30 Scorpion
it involves real money so I'm mildly panicking
 Burning Roses
10:06:00 Your local therapist
Ah, they could be doing other things at the moment, I'm sure they'll get back to you soon
 Burning Roses
10:05:25 Your local therapist
It seems Evergreen is on at the moment, might be a good idea to PM them your issue




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Critique me!May 15, 2022 07:29 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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I have no clue what I'm doing. Gallery Link

A few hours ago I was bored and decided to become an artist with no previous experience. With that being said this is my attempt to draw an OC of mine and I would like feedback. The anatomy seems a bit funky, he is supposed to be a wolf. I also colored him. For those of you that want to, you can go over and red line stuff so I can see what to fix! If you have tips on blending and colors that would be appreciated as well. I draw using Adobe Fresco, but if there are other good apps to use, let me know.

I'll link minor stuff and put the images for more important stuff so this isn't too long. Thanks :)

OC for reference(yes the oc is mine)

All image credit from here down belongs to me.

First red line

IMG-1638.jpg

First red line and outline

Altered final outline (I have no idea how I changed it this much)

IMG-1637.jpg

Colored final product

IMG-1636.jpg

Colored final product with OG lines behind it (for comparison, also I forgot to screenshot the red line that's under it. That one is in fact the original, the first red line linked at the top is the second red line I did in order to fix this. If that makes sense.)


Edited at May 17, 2022 07:49 PM by Ciao
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:21 PM


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hello! very cute character youve got there!!

ive been drawing canines/wolves in particular for going on 6(ish) years now id say, and ive learned a lot about drawing them over the years, so im here to offer a few tips (as well as some blue lines for future reference)!

so canine anatomy is very hard to explain, but the way i improved is by studying the canine body by tracing over actual photos of wolves i found online. ive found simplifying their bodies and more specifically their limbs into simple shapes and refinining from there helps a ton for anatomy improvement!

ive bluelined over your image and focused on a few different things, and ill list the links to view them below!

these are just a few quick base sketches i whipped up within like 5 minutes so theyre not perfect, but i hope theyre able to help a bit!

you have a lot of potential and im so excited to see your improvement!! if you need anything at all dont be scared to reach out to me and ill try my best to help! :)


Edited at May 15, 2022 08:26 PM by jaune
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:53 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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Thank you for the help! I can definitely see how I can improve the design more, and the blue line especially helped. For the anatomy I think tracing a real wolf would really help as well. I appreciate your critique and i'll definitely reach out if I have more questions :)
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:07 PM


Former Pack

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Ah- I might be of assistance here. Anatomy is quite off, /lighthearted
If I forget to add the redlines pm me I get busy lol
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:48 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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Thanks, i'll pm you^^

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