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Totally off topic, but do you like Taylor Swift? I was reading your bio and noticed the lyrics!
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ew!!!
 kycantina
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Hallow, relateable, I cried so many tears over linkedin girl, lol
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Nev

No, but he asked me to write his name or property of *name* on me, multiple times
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Hallow
At least he didn't ask for you to get a tattoo of his name on your face.
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I mean he bought me a ring to ask me to date him
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Trust me, I am too. He was so incredibly toxic, I legitimately get upset that I stayed as long as I did and that I cried over it
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Amygdala,
He did
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Hallow, not that!! I'm glad y'all aren't together anymore
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Did ghostface survive? I am kinda scared to check it XD
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ET,
Right?? They match it so well *^*
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Momentarily poofed.

I'm playing a game right now aha
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Ky

He also didn't have a car and made me drive 3 hours to him and back to see him. There is so so so much more, but a lot of it is more than PG 13 unfortunately
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Not me wasting mush on adopts
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Hallow, bro imagine being jealous of someone's family and pet, god,,
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Eci, she got mad that our friends against her when I told them how she was treating me hehe
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I'm too young to feel this elderly realizing my birthday is soon.

I feel old. <|3
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Ecifiras

Thank you lol. He was completely mental. I seriously considered sending him my therapy bill.

Ky

dude what XD I remember this guy told me that he was jealous of "my roommate, my school, my cat, and my family" for "taking me away from him"

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Critique me!May 15, 2022 07:29 PM


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I have no clue what I'm doing. Gallery Link

A few hours ago I was bored and decided to become an artist with no previous experience. With that being said this is my attempt to draw an OC of mine and I would like feedback. The anatomy seems a bit funky, he is supposed to be a wolf. I also colored him. For those of you that want to, you can go over and red line stuff so I can see what to fix! If you have tips on blending and colors that would be appreciated as well. I draw using Adobe Fresco, but if there are other good apps to use, let me know.

I'll link minor stuff and put the images for more important stuff so this isn't too long. Thanks :)

OC for reference(yes the oc is mine)

All image credit from here down belongs to me.

First red line

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First red line and outline

Altered final outline (I have no idea how I changed it this much)

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Colored final product

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Colored final product with OG lines behind it (for comparison, also I forgot to screenshot the red line that's under it. That one is in fact the original, the first red line linked at the top is the second red line I did in order to fix this. If that makes sense.)


Edited at May 17, 2022 07:49 PM by Ciao
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:21 PM


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hello! very cute character youve got there!!

ive been drawing canines/wolves in particular for going on 6(ish) years now id say, and ive learned a lot about drawing them over the years, so im here to offer a few tips (as well as some blue lines for future reference)!

so canine anatomy is very hard to explain, but the way i improved is by studying the canine body by tracing over actual photos of wolves i found online. ive found simplifying their bodies and more specifically their limbs into simple shapes and refinining from there helps a ton for anatomy improvement!

ive bluelined over your image and focused on a few different things, and ill list the links to view them below!

these are just a few quick base sketches i whipped up within like 5 minutes so theyre not perfect, but i hope theyre able to help a bit!

you have a lot of potential and im so excited to see your improvement!! if you need anything at all dont be scared to reach out to me and ill try my best to help! :)


Edited at May 15, 2022 08:26 PM by jaune
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:53 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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Thank you for the help! I can definitely see how I can improve the design more, and the blue line especially helped. For the anatomy I think tracing a real wolf would really help as well. I appreciate your critique and i'll definitely reach out if I have more questions :)
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:07 PM


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Ah- I might be of assistance here. Anatomy is quite off, /lighthearted
If I forget to add the redlines pm me I get busy lol
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:48 PM


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Thanks, i'll pm you^^

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