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Opinions/ HelpDecember 23, 2021 03:39 PM


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So I'm wondering if this needs improvements...

Edited at December 23, 2021 03:48 PM by The Mourning Moon
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I mean, it's really solid all things considered. Nice colors, chill background, good anatomy and the lines are all really smooth. I love how you did the eyes and how they're so much brighter than the rest of the character. I only have a couple of things to nitpick, and honestly you could sell stuff like this as-is for a huge profit.

The only thing I would change is the transition from the neck to the chest(?) floof (if this is an anthro character, maybe working a bit on shoulder placement), and the perspective is a little bit odd on the nose (you can see the top of the nose, implying the character's head is tilted pretty far down, but their eye and horn placement seems like we're looking at their face from the side.) And to go with that, I would have put the horn with the rings on it further up/back.

But those are both easy fixes. Very pretty overall <3

Edited at December 23, 2021 04:11 PM by Finnick
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Finnick said:
I mean, it's really solid all things considered. Nice colors, chill background, good anatomy and the lines are all really smooth. I love how you did the eyes and how they're so much brighter than the rest of the character. I only have a couple of things to nitpick, and honestly you could sell stuff like this as-is for a huge profit.

The only thing I would change is the transition from the neck to the chest(?) floof (if this is an anthro character, which it seems to be, maybe working a bit on shoulder placement), and the perspective is a little bit odd on the nose (you can see the top of the nose, implying the character's head is tilted pretty far down, but their eye and horn placement seems like we're looking at their face from the side.) And to go with that, I would have put the horn with the rings on it further up/back.

But those are both easy fixes. Very pretty overall <3


Thank you for the positive notes, especially on the line work.
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Now that I turn my screen at the angle from which she's looking I do see the weird placement of the horns and the eyes need a nore sharp curve-
I did not notice that!
On the floof thing this is a mythical character, I'm working on a full body reference and its supposed to look like a built in neck scarf thing-
Is there an idea you have so it looks more natural?
Opinions/ HelpDecember 23, 2021 04:20 PM


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Only thing I would change is making the line between the neck and the floof a little... fluffier, lol. The rest of the neck floof has a lot of texture, but the line between the fluff and the neck looks a little more flat.
Honestly though, it's not that big of a thing. It doesn't take away from it really, just a detail.

Edited at December 23, 2021 04:21 PM by Finnick
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Finnick said:
Only thing I would change is making the line between the neck and the floof a little... fluffier, lol. The rest of the neck floof has a lot of texture, but the line between the fluff and the neck looks a little more flat.
Honestly though, it's not that big of a thing. It doesn't take away from it really, just a detail.


Ahhh... I see-
it needs more detail there and eye adjustments and horn adjustments...
THANK YOU SO MUUUCH! ❤️❤️❤️
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No problem! Honestly it looks so cool. You're a really good artist! <3
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Finnick said:
No problem! Honestly it looks so cool. You're a really good artist! <3


Thank you so much
ive been drawing all my life ^^

Finnick said:
No problem! Honestly it looks so cool. You're a really good artist! <3



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