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Oh you customised him already, he looks good

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Damn, i hope it didn't deleate too much
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that's just... the account for it now it seems xD
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emmet,
i'm excited to see how he turns out after all that.
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Ill have to give him a name and spoil him with gear before long
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what are you doing on your alt now xD
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not my computer crashing and deleting some of my art progress q-q
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i rarely draw backgrounds, any advice for the rocks in the foreground? or advice in general. I feel like they need more contrast but >.>
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I saw
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taxes.
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Theodil is still holding strong somehow... I was expecting him to kick the bucket instantly but he's still alive
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He had the audacity to die on me at 15
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Looking for constructive criticism for my artNovember 26, 2021 03:17 PM


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yeah as the title says!
I dont like my art or my style lol, so i need ya'lls help to improve it
tell me what to fix
Yeah. Just help me fix all my shit ^^
Looking for constructive criticism for my artNovember 30, 2021 04:10 PM


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Okay, so where to start. The head. The head is very odd? Ears are way too big and they do NOT have tufts like that. Ear tufts are invisible, if hardly even there at all. The eyes are too big, and the muzzle is smushed down. The cheek fur all needs to go down and with the flow of the fur. The fur overgrowth needs to go away on the eye as well.
It looks like you were trying to male them look skinny while still fluffy? They are either one or the other, as the fur will cover that up. The body is too small, the neck too big. The legs need to be shortened and brought forward a tad. Like I said before, stop the overgrowth in the fur!!! Get rid of the odd tufts on the legs. Period. The legs bent at a very awkward angle. We arent drawing horses! It's a bit less noticeable then how you made it.
The hind leg needs to be pulled back a tad, it's too round. The fur, again, needs to be taken away. I changed the angle quite a bit, to match with realistic animals.
The tail is too "fluffed out" and is way too long.
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There. I am not going to sugarcoat anything. You said constructive criticism; it's not an artistic choice when you want to improve.

Edited at November 30, 2021 04:13 PM by Interstellar Sun
Looking for constructive criticism for my artDecember 2, 2021 10:44 AM


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Thank you, this was EXACTLY the type of crit i was looking for! No need to worry! ^^
I do tend to overfluff the bodies. Thats something I really need to cut down on, thank you for pointing it out!
My main problems for the face and such are the muzzles and ears. Scorpius is a fennec fox, so I think I overexagerated the ears way too much, and the muzzle simply looks wonky when I try to draw it face on and long, so I tend to do them facing the side or 3/4s.
Do you mind having a tutorial of how to do the muzzle facing forward? Its something I do really struggle with ^^
The legs are also something I need to start doing better on. I often only use guidelines for the face/neck, and just sketch out the legs/tail/body on its own, except for a few seperate times. I do need to also look at a few references, like the one you posted above, and such ^^
thanks, inter! Means alot! I'll post some more art in my gallery with my progress soon! ^^

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