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 Caeruleum
01:02:15 Cae, Blue
AND both dropped relics, AND both relics were excellent??? luck used up omg
 Caeruleum
01:01:19 Cae, Blue
grendreki down and just one wolf fled. i love this
 MLadySkylar
01:00:40 P'Sky
Limbo
I'm all about better parenting, I've seen the horrors of old school parenting and how it affects them as adults.
I always make sure the kiddos know they can talk to me at anytime about anything.
It also helps with what they want for Christmas and birthdays.
They also know their manners.
 Caeruleum
12:59:03 Cae, Blue
em, this is the best greeting ever i love the little blue baby <333
 Continental Wolves
12:58:26 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
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Hey Cae
 limbo
12:56:45 ZD
i'm glad to see new parents falling away from that though. it's probably cheaper in the long run too, since you're not buying stuff your kid will refuse to play with LOL
 Caeruleum
12:55:07 Cae, Blue
real
 limbo
12:53:35 ZD
how dare you develop interests in things that your gender does not align with, let me take all this away from you while you're at an important developmental stage of life and dictate what you will enjoy >:(
 Feiella
12:52:32 Fei The Sleepy Ghost
I apparently stole two Grendels and a Nordic Warrior Woman without knowing
 MLadySkylar
12:51:31 P'Sky
Kids will be kids
Your food will never be warm unless they're asleep
They eat your food.
And you hear mommy 50 times in 5 minutes
 Caeruleum
12:50:04 Cae, Blue
but you as a three year old boy cannot show feminine traits such as caregiving!!! or as a little four year old girl you cannot keep naming every single car you see on the street correctly as thats a boy interest to have!!
 Leon
12:49:56 
I got -1 moves again in explore XD
 Feiella
12:49:49 Fei The Sleepy Ghost
limbo
Just let kids be kids
 MLadySkylar
12:49:43 P'Sky
I played with dolls, barbies, and bratz growing up.
I still loved bugs and playing in the mud.
My older brother loved playing can age patch babies.
I leave it open to my kiddos as well.
I have dinosaurs, dump trucks, Barbies and accessories to trip over
 Apothecary
12:49:31 Medicinally Autistic
I think I might just take a break from wolfplay until next week, I know I normally compete in the FMC, but the &am-11pm's are really going to take it out of me, let alone exploring on top of that.

But I'm super excited to see who wins this FMC
 Leon
12:49:31 
Congrats! Your pack has dominated the Forest and has ascended to Level 3!

dang XD I just got to level two now I'm on level 3 so fast XD
 technoblade
12:48:49 Lil Techy | Techno
Dreki 5 flees successfully

so I guess the wreath doesn't work on you then
 limbo
12:48:33 ZD
gendering toys is such a wild thing. just let kids play with whatever takes their interest - better than them being bored and annoying LOL
 Caeruleum
12:47:36 Cae, Blue
i refused dolls for years. like my mom had them hidden deep in the closet because id want to destroy them the moment i saw them. fam did try to get me to like "girl toys" like dolls more than "boy toys" like cars but i was firm lmao
 MLadySkylar
12:47:12 P'Sky
Amy
That part of my family has always been weird, then another part.
The men, husbands get food first, not the babies.
I wish a grown person would try to eat before my kids.
I'll pull out my rolling pin on you

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Looking for constructive criticism for my artNovember 26, 2021 03:17 PM


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yeah as the title says!
I dont like my art or my style lol, so i need ya'lls help to improve it
tell me what to fix
Yeah. Just help me fix all my shit ^^
Looking for constructive criticism for my artNovember 30, 2021 04:10 PM


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Okay, so where to start. The head. The head is very odd? Ears are way too big and they do NOT have tufts like that. Ear tufts are invisible, if hardly even there at all. The eyes are too big, and the muzzle is smushed down. The cheek fur all needs to go down and with the flow of the fur. The fur overgrowth needs to go away on the eye as well.
It looks like you were trying to male them look skinny while still fluffy? They are either one or the other, as the fur will cover that up. The body is too small, the neck too big. The legs need to be shortened and brought forward a tad. Like I said before, stop the overgrowth in the fur!!! Get rid of the odd tufts on the legs. Period. The legs bent at a very awkward angle. We arent drawing horses! It's a bit less noticeable then how you made it.
The hind leg needs to be pulled back a tad, it's too round. The fur, again, needs to be taken away. I changed the angle quite a bit, to match with realistic animals.
The tail is too "fluffed out" and is way too long.
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There. I am not going to sugarcoat anything. You said constructive criticism; it's not an artistic choice when you want to improve.

Edited at November 30, 2021 04:13 PM by Interstellar Sun
Looking for constructive criticism for my artDecember 2, 2021 10:44 AM


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Thank you, this was EXACTLY the type of crit i was looking for! No need to worry! ^^
I do tend to overfluff the bodies. Thats something I really need to cut down on, thank you for pointing it out!
My main problems for the face and such are the muzzles and ears. Scorpius is a fennec fox, so I think I overexagerated the ears way too much, and the muzzle simply looks wonky when I try to draw it face on and long, so I tend to do them facing the side or 3/4s.
Do you mind having a tutorial of how to do the muzzle facing forward? Its something I do really struggle with ^^
The legs are also something I need to start doing better on. I often only use guidelines for the face/neck, and just sketch out the legs/tail/body on its own, except for a few seperate times. I do need to also look at a few references, like the one you posted above, and such ^^
thanks, inter! Means alot! I'll post some more art in my gallery with my progress soon! ^^

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