To me I think everything looks pretty nice.

You've got your proportions down pretty nice so far, and your coloring is great. Like Pride the legs look a bit off, mainly back to me. Perhaps look at some references from different angles and poses, or look up the animal's leg anatomy. The only thing the first picture might need fixed is a longer snout, as I though it was a cat :')

The best advice I can give is to keep drawing from life. Don't worry about style as it will form later as you create your own visual short hand to translate the world around you.

I think one of the things that helped me is watching other people and how they drew their stuff, kinda just keeping track of how they drew their fur, or how their paws looked, etc.