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Hey guys to recently a friend gave me a BUNCH of characters they no longer wanted there are 15-20 odd horses and I want to learn how to draw horses and to get help with learning some tips and/or tricks that could help me learn an efficient way to draw some nice looking horses.
Currently my horse art; https://i.postimg.cc/hGzQ6xMS/IMG-20190106-220959-087.jpg https://i.postimg.cc/1zjDX79N/20190109-201620.jpg https://i.postimg.cc/Hx9vfC0C/20190109-195913.jpg https://i.postimg.cc/GmDr8HJ3/20190109-193831.jpg https://i.postimg.cc/3NCX2z45/Untitled186.png
Thanks a lot guys in advanced. Edited at March 10, 2019 07:10 AM by Haze
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Hello!As a fellow horse artist with little experience in it for commissions,I am here to criticize what you have now and what you could improve :3 I'll explain it with the following image https://i.postimg.cc/JnQKkW3G/0-C66513-F-752-C-406-F-A5-FA-6-CF48419-F528.jpg
As you can see the head isn't just a circle, the forehead is flat. Overall your head is quite nice, only the forhead and the jaw starts too soon.
Your neck is quite nice also, only sometimes it could be a bit longer, but it depends on what breed and what you like.
The back is too long compared with the rest of the horses body, the shoulder you drew in is nice though. Also the legs are quite nice, really, legs are really hard ^^
Also the belly isn't supposed to go up. It's round. Only at the front legs it could be a bit straight. Like what you've done.
I made the picture lines so you can see the shapes in it ^^
Goodluck! Edited at March 10, 2019 04:50 AM by Neytrix
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Neytrix said: Hello!As a fellow horse artist with little experience in it for commissions,I am here to criticize what you have now and what you could improve :3I'll explain it with the following image https://i.postimg.cc/JnQKkW3G/0-C66513-F-752-C-406-F-A5-FA-6-CF48419-F528.jpg
As you can see the head isn't just a circle, the forehead is flat. Overall your head is quite nice, only the forhead and the jaw starts too soon.
Your neck is quite nice also, only sometimes it could be a bit longer, but it depends on what breed and what you like.
The back is too long compared with the rest of the horses body, the shoulder you drew in is nice though. Also the legs are quite nice, really, legs are really hard ^^
Also the belly isn't supposed to go up. It's round. Only at the front legs it could be a bit straight. Like what you've done.
I made the picture lines so you can see the shapes in it ^^
Goodluck!
Thank you I really appreciate the help!!
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https://i.postimg.cc/3NCX2z45/Untitled186.png With the help adding this to my list of progress, please let me know what other tips you guys have!!
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Hello! Your art is pretty, but here are some tips: Unless you are going for an Arabian horse, I would say your muzzle is a little bit too dished. As a general rule, horses foreheads are pretty flat. Secondly, the barrel(belly) of your horses are either a little to skinny.I would say you could round them a bit. Your first horse also is a little long - so make sure to look at proportions.For some of your images, I think you could go for a longer, more low-set neck. I also think you could make the pastern(between the hoof and fetlock) a Bit thinner and longer. Overall, great work! I would love to see more of your drawings. I think people would be willing to buy them.
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