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 Serpents
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if anyone sees my wolves in explore pm me
 Malpha
06:39:14 St. Algo's Pack/Mal
Wait there are wolves with double defects??
 Feiella
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Asmodeus
at the rate of the bug going, I doubt you will be going to any classes
 The Reaper
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Do I scrap the design that turned out looking like a chocolate cake doughnut with white icing-?
 LeafClan
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I just pulled this out of WolfParty!
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Fei

probably his roomate

managers in our class are students but yea his roommate probably gave it to him or one the people he smokes with
 Feiella
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Asmodeus
The medical class manager, has it? Oh no. Who gave it to him? XD
 Avatar Of Lust
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dang hidden falls is empty
 Avatar Of Lust
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Fei

I know staff here is glad I ain't sick cause when I get sick I get whiny and have an major attitude problem XD

my medical class manager was quarantined today cause he has it
 Feiella
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Asmodeus
Lucky you indeed. Tell the bug to leave you alone
 Avatar Of Lust
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Fei

I hope so too

not to mention people on campus are getting quarantined because of a stomach bug going around, luckly I have yet to get sick
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 Feiella
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Asmodeus
Hopefully it stays warm and doesn't become too hot for you
 Avatar Of Lust
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Fei

where I'm at its only now getting Simi warm, its been below freezing and in the negatives here for a while
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Jack <3
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Snowball!!
 Feiella
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Asmodeus
It really does.
 LeafClan
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Why do I have a random green fern?
 Queen Elsa
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back from dinner
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Fei

that must suck

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 Serpents
06:41:06 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
if anyone sees my wolves in explore pm me
 Malpha
06:39:14 St. Algo's Pack/Mal
Wait there are wolves with double defects??
 Feiella
06:39:05 Pack of Sharp Snap
Asmodeus
at the rate of the bug going, I doubt you will be going to any classes
 The Reaper
06:38:51 Reaper / Grim
Do I scrap the design that turned out looking like a chocolate cake doughnut with white icing-?
 LeafClan
06:38:47 Leaf She/Her
-WP Click-
I just pulled this out of WolfParty!
 Avatar Of Lust
06:37:43 Asmodeus (he/they)
Fei

probably his roomate

managers in our class are students but yea his roommate probably gave it to him or one the people he smokes with
 Feiella
06:36:54 Pack of Sharp Snap
Asmodeus
The medical class manager, has it? Oh no. Who gave it to him? XD
 Avatar Of Lust
06:35:38 Asmodeus (he/they)
dang hidden falls is empty
 Avatar Of Lust
06:33:11 Asmodeus (he/they)
Fei

I know staff here is glad I ain't sick cause when I get sick I get whiny and have an major attitude problem XD

my medical class manager was quarantined today cause he has it
 Feiella
06:31:40 Pack of Sharp Snap
Asmodeus
Lucky you indeed. Tell the bug to leave you alone
 Avatar Of Lust
06:30:27 Asmodeus (he/they)
Fei

I hope so too

not to mention people on campus are getting quarantined because of a stomach bug going around, luckly I have yet to get sick
 Jermey
06:29:08 
hi
 Feiella
06:29:07 Pack of Sharp Snap
Asmodeus
Hopefully it stays warm and doesn't become too hot for you
 Avatar Of Lust
06:27:33 Asmodeus (he/they)
Fei

where I'm at its only now getting Simi warm, its been below freezing and in the negatives here for a while
 Queen Elsa
06:27:21 Snowflake, Queen
Jack <3
 Kháos
06:24:37 
Snowball!!
 Feiella
06:24:28 Pack of Sharp Snap
Asmodeus
It really does.
 LeafClan
06:24:01 Leaf She/Her
Why do I have a random green fern?
 Queen Elsa
06:22:45 Snowflake, Queen
back from dinner
 Avatar Of Lust
06:21:17 Asmodeus (he/they)
Fei

that must suck




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Galaxy HelpApril 16, 2018 09:07 PM


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Here's the image

https://s14.postimg.cc/4h7dmgk29/Random_Galaxy.png


For some reason, something's been really bothering me about this picture and I can't seem to figure out what.

All critiques are appreciated, or just tell me what you wish was changed

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.
Galaxy HelpApril 16, 2018 09:12 PM


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Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^
Galaxy HelpApril 16, 2018 09:37 PM


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DarkCloudClan said:
Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^


Alright, lemme spam the stars and update the picture XD

Edit: UPDATED

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.
Galaxy HelpApril 16, 2018 11:31 PM


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Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:
Galaxy HelpApril 16, 2018 11:53 PM


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a m b e r said:
Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:


XD Thanks, let me update it again
Galaxy HelpApril 16, 2018 11:55 PM


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I really like it! Possibly a couple other colors blended? Lighter blues and brighter pinks maybe. Just a subtle change.
Galaxy HelpApril 17, 2018 12:48 AM


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Maybe if you make it a bit lighter?
Galaxy HelpApril 17, 2018 01:48 AM


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I love It! I don't know much about art, but the purple cloud/nebula looks a little on the denser side.

Still, it's really beautiful! :D

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