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 CriesInTheNight
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heyo WP

lol i left WP for a while and am now remembering just how much den space I had:O
 VioletEcho
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Pvp anyone?
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she's in labor! fingers are crossed.
 The Day Crawler
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Yong-sun

Mine is even older :]
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Take him, DS
 Dragons Blood
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why is he still alive? why wont DS take him
 Blue Wolves
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Noooo
They took Quiach
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 Whispering Snow
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Spirit
That really was a bad idea
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Why did I decide to stay up until five am ;-; i am in pain
 cavendish
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pray for longevity!! may all live forever
 cavendish
07:38:58 caven
i think its 7:45 ds, so in 6 minutes
 VioletEcho
07:38:34 Is a dinosaur rawr
I hope we are all safe from DS this week<3
 cavendish
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44 over 15, 6 are customs i am on my knees begging right now
 Whispering Snow
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When do you know you are safe?
 cavendish
07:36:28 caven
i have so many old sv's im cooked if i lose a couple
 Whispering Snow
07:34:58 It's me Rain!! :D
I have 4 over 15, making up almost 800 of my dominance
 cavendish
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please dear god not her
 Vulpixles
07:32:44 Pixie, Vul | ♈
Why are toucan feathers only so violently inflated whenever I need one? Like I'm not paying 200 mush for a feather. I'll just have to be patient.
 VioletEcho
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Please stay alive
 Whispering Snow
07:32:06 It's me Rain!! :D
Oh crap
I got 4

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 CriesInTheNight
08:32:23 Sorrowful Howls
heyo WP

lol i left WP for a while and am now remembering just how much den space I had:O
 VioletEcho
08:20:23 Is a dinosaur rawr
Pvp anyone?
 ~♥Nux♥~
07:58:15 You're just yellow
Good morning, chat ^^
 Winter Rose
07:56:54 Rose/wints
-WP Click-

she's in labor! fingers are crossed.
 The Day Crawler
07:56:08 Day, Crawl, Runnr
Yong-sun

Mine is even older :]
-WP Click-
Take him, DS
 Dragons Blood
07:48:34 Yong-sun (he/him)
-WP Click-

why is he still alive? why wont DS take him
 Blue Wolves
07:45:51 Da ba dee
Noooo
They took Quiach
-WP Click-
 Whispering Snow
07:41:11 It's me Rain!! :D
Spirit
That really was a bad idea
 SpiritGuardian
07:40:34 Mr Palette Guy
Why did I decide to stay up until five am ;-; i am in pain
 cavendish
07:39:29 caven
pray for longevity!! may all live forever
 cavendish
07:38:58 caven
i think its 7:45 ds, so in 6 minutes
 VioletEcho
07:38:34 Is a dinosaur rawr
I hope we are all safe from DS this week<3
 cavendish
07:38:24 caven
44 over 15, 6 are customs i am on my knees begging right now
 Whispering Snow
07:38:01 It's me Rain!! :D
When do you know you are safe?
 cavendish
07:36:28 caven
i have so many old sv's im cooked if i lose a couple
 Whispering Snow
07:34:58 It's me Rain!! :D
I have 4 over 15, making up almost 800 of my dominance
 cavendish
07:34:16 caven
-WP Click-
please dear god not her
 Vulpixles
07:32:44 Pixie, Vul | ♈
Why are toucan feathers only so violently inflated whenever I need one? Like I'm not paying 200 mush for a feather. I'll just have to be patient.
 VioletEcho
07:32:17 Is a dinosaur rawr
-WP Click-
Please stay alive
 Whispering Snow
07:32:06 It's me Rain!! :D
Oh crap
I got 4




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animation/timing help/ criticism neededJune 8, 2023 10:41 AM


Krampus

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Working on a mini amv, i'm trying to get it done by (this) friday
Somethings off with the timing, can't tell what it is :/
i don't really like the first frame, so i might get rid of it/change it. It doesn't really hold the feeling of weight/locomotion

Edited at June 8, 2023 10:42 AM by Krampus
animation/timing help/ criticism neededJune 8, 2023 05:29 PM


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Hmm it looks like you might need more in-betweens, unless that's what you were planning to do.

There's also not a lot of anticipation in the first few frames of the action, which may be why it feels so stiff.

I'd reccomend looking at smear/smush frames and trying those out to get a bit more movement going!

Overall it's really good and good luck with the rest of the project!


Edited at June 8, 2023 05:29 PM by Beetle Tea
animation/timing help/ criticism neededJune 8, 2023 06:35 PM


Krampus

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Beetle Tea said:

Hmm it looks like you might need more in-betweens, unless that's what you were planning to do.

There's also not a lot of anticipation in the first few frames of the action, which may be why it feels so stiff.

I'd reccomend looking at smear/smush frames and trying those out to get a bit more movement going!

Overall it's really good and good luck with the rest of the project!



i just realised in the last action, i meant to put a flicking of the head/eyes, (as a secondary action) and completely forgot about it.
Not a lot of smear/smush frames here, i'll look into adding those.
thank you for your advice! ^^

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