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Hey folks! Looking for some critiques. This site grew my skill exponentially, and I'm always looking to improve. exp a. of past horrors: (do not critique this piece, it's old and just for comparison!) Click, there’s so much more where that came from
(2019 sob) I am looking for critiques - I am not sensitive, please tear my work apart. You all are very sweet with your compliments, but I would like to improve - my ego does not need boosting at the moment. my gallery is here, but these are the works I'm most proud of: click please send help! I will not take anything personally, no worries. I'm looking more for general critiques than piece-specific redlines, etc., but whatever floats your boat. |
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I personally think the neck looks a little thick, however, I like sleek and probably too thin looks on canines. It looks great to me other than that! |
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Lightbringer
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Oh, that's old art for comparison! Sorry for the confusion, my gallery is linked just below :') |
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Whoops, my apologies!
sock monkey said:
Oh, that's old art for comparison! Sorry for the confusion, my gallery is linked just below :')
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Darkseeker
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Hello - I suck at describing things - so could I sketch over your art to show you what I'm taliking about? |
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Darkseeker
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Hello - I suck at describing things - so could I sketch over your art to show you what I'm taliking about? |
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Darkseeker
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Sorry for the double - I'll poast something in about an hour once I get off of work^^ (if this dosnt get addressed by someone else) and I know you said your ego dosnt need boasting - but your art is amazing! I'll need to get my hands on some eventually |
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Aight, you know I adore your art, think its stunning, and have seen it from the start, but thats not what ya want lol. - I really only see a few things, and they're barely noticeable and could probably just be passed off as style. - I feel some of the front facing views you do look slightly flat. But from the other way. The chests/legs seem very narrow. Not that it doesn't seem three dimensional, just as if they've sort of been squished/narrowed down. With this guy for example, I feel they're lacking a bit of hindquarter. The perspective/angle is spot on, but I feel there should be more width. Give them horses big butts XD - On this one, the hind legs seem slightly off. If you were to imagine the creature flipped, its right hind is off center and attached to a different part of the body from the left one. They also seem a bit too long on the femur and short through the cannon (or whatever its called on a canine). Then again, its a mythical creature and appears to be a hybrid, so the anatomy could be purposefully differing from a more realistic species to give it a fantasy appearance. |
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Thanks so much! And yeah, I completely agree on both those points aha, I do need to start drawing out more proportional horse butts lmao, (no bc they thick when you really think about it) it's been too long since I was around them :') and thanks for pointing that out on the second one! So many people want to commission canines that I'm losing my equine touch lmao again, I really appreciate it <3 |
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