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vah,
thank you! :)

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Nice!! They all look absolutely incredible!

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there, finally finished the adopts

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12:17:08 katy | beetle

this cat i'm designing has such a flaming orange palette. i love it *^*

12:16:15 Space Pirate Captain

Yeah I'm not gonna say I doodled gently today.

Definitely did not do that--XDD

12:15:36 katy | beetle

awh my beetle also gets doodled gently, i feel that :')

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Vapor

That is so sweet and I love it.

Doodle him gently--I love that

Collar

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Thank you guys 🥺 he is my son, I had to doodle him gently

12:08:56 katy | beetle

collar,
so cutee *^* i love your art style

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Vapor

*^*

That's so cute

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Fei

Oh definitely. I want to keep my insides in one piece and not pieces-- XD

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Ohh he's cuute
It felt so good to doodle

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That sounds so good honestly.

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April 16, 2018 09:07 PM

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Here's the image

https://s14.postimg.cc/4h7dmgk29/Random_Galaxy.png

For some reason, something's been really bothering me about this picture and I can't seem to figure out what.

All critiques are appreciated, or just tell me what you wish was changed

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 09:12 PM

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Maybe more stars? We don't really see them

Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

April 16, 2018 09:37 PM

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DarkCloudClan said:
Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

Alright, lemme spam the stars and update the picture XD

Edit: UPDATED

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 11:31 PM

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Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

April 16, 2018 11:53 PM

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a m b e r said:
Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

XD Thanks, let me update it again