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11:36:56 ♰ Vapor ♰

Wishing you the BEST of luck Nev </3

11:35:41 Stray, LT | H/H

Vennie,

He got more than that, runt

11:35:05 Reaper / Grim

QT
Bet bitch, but that aint gonna shut me up ;)

11:34:52 Never/Nev

Collar
Thank you thank you... I doubt it'll happen if things keep going the way that they are, but I can be hopeful lmao

11:34:18 Space Pirate Captain

Never
Oh man. I hope you do.

11:33:51 Stray, LT | H/H

Vennie,

I'll give you a little more than a concussion with the shit off of amazon

11:32:41 ♰ Vapor ♰

bed before nine is so fucking real, wishing you luck Nev!

11:32:27 Reaper / Grim

QT
Oh I doubt it'll be a concussion

11:31:40 marsh | they/it

@Zeraphia
thank you </3 im staring at it worried it looks off
wings are funky

11:31:02 Never/Nev

I would be happy just getting to bed before 9 on Valentines day :"D

11:30:45 Stray, LT | H/H

Vennie,

That discussion is going to turn into a concussion real quick, fork

11:30:09 Reaper / Grim

QT
Make me bitch

11:29:27 Stray, LT | H/H

Discussion* fuck

11:29:18 Space Pirate Captain

Marsh

Those look amazing though!

11:29:17 Stray, LT | H/H

Vennie,

Hush, this is no longer a topic of dicussion

11:29:12 ♰ Vapor ♰

Spirit

OHH CUUTE
I wanna send mine flowers, but I need something other than chocolates... Jaffa cakes, maybe
He's not a fan of sweets

11:28:26 Reaper / Grim

QT
XD It made ya feel better no?

11:27:09 Stray, LT | H/H

Vennie,

Oh, god, don't bring that up

11:26:08 Reaper / Grim

QT
XD I told you cheesy. Remember, when we first met and started talking, how I told you dad jokes until you felt better?

11:25:25 Stray, LT | H/H

Vennie,

Oh lord

Stop

That is-

God

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11:36:56 ♰ Vapor ♰

Wishing you the BEST of luck Nev </3

11:35:41 Stray, LT | H/H

Vennie,

He got more than that, runt

11:35:05 Reaper / Grim

QT
Bet bitch, but that aint gonna shut me up ;)

11:34:52 Never/Nev

Collar
Thank you thank you... I doubt it'll happen if things keep going the way that they are, but I can be hopeful lmao

11:34:18 Space Pirate Captain

Never
Oh man. I hope you do.

11:33:51 Stray, LT | H/H

Vennie,

I'll give you a little more than a concussion with the shit off of amazon

11:32:41 ♰ Vapor ♰

bed before nine is so fucking real, wishing you luck Nev!

11:32:27 Reaper / Grim

QT
Oh I doubt it'll be a concussion

11:31:40 marsh | they/it

@Zeraphia
thank you </3 im staring at it worried it looks off
wings are funky

11:31:02 Never/Nev

I would be happy just getting to bed before 9 on Valentines day :"D

11:30:45 Stray, LT | H/H

Vennie,

That discussion is going to turn into a concussion real quick, fork

11:30:09 Reaper / Grim

QT
Make me bitch

11:29:27 Stray, LT | H/H

Discussion* fuck

11:29:18 Space Pirate Captain

Marsh

Those look amazing though!

11:29:17 Stray, LT | H/H

Vennie,

Hush, this is no longer a topic of dicussion

11:29:12 ♰ Vapor ♰

Spirit

OHH CUUTE
I wanna send mine flowers, but I need something other than chocolates... Jaffa cakes, maybe
He's not a fan of sweets

11:28:26 Reaper / Grim

QT
XD It made ya feel better no?

11:27:09 Stray, LT | H/H

Vennie,

Oh, god, don't bring that up

11:26:08 Reaper / Grim

QT
XD I told you cheesy. Remember, when we first met and started talking, how I told you dad jokes until you felt better?

11:25:25 Stray, LT | H/H

Vennie,

Oh lord

Stop

That is-

God

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January 3, 2018 11:40 PM

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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo

January 4, 2018 12:21 AM

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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.

January 29, 2018 07:06 PM

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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3

January 29, 2018 10:16 PM

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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer

January 29, 2018 10:41 PM

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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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