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my brain keeps trying to type your name as NCR because MCR
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So I caved
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so is draconis down for good?
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 A bonsaitreasure
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dang it need more space for wolfs loll :)
 Night Raven College
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Sense*
 Night Raven College
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Which doesn't make any sene
 Night Raven College
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Lol, I'm doing well apart from the not able to sleep thing and my bedroom being as cold as a freezer.
 snake
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NRC
tired xd
my brain keeps trying to type your name as NCR because MCR
how about you, lol
 Night Raven College
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Anyways how are you doing snake?
 Night Raven College
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So I caved
 Night Raven College
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I'm not supposed.to be lol but I can't sleep and it's 2:20 am.
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:')
 snake
01:18:48 
bedtime is for staring at screens
 Night Raven College
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I can't sleep):
 Winterfell
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Cwn
Perfect just needed confirmation
 Gwyllgi
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Its yours, they gave it to you, if you don't want to give it back then keep it :p
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Guys if someone gifts you something and you get something good from the gift then they demand the thing you got from the gift should you give it ?
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Yes.
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so is draconis down for good?
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hello! :)
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Hey
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anyone up for an rp or chat pm me im bored
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@Embers
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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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