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You need a Glacial ice from barter and then if you have it you go to Pack> Account> Change faction allegiance
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How do i change groups? (Neutral-darkseeker)
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Khaos
Not me wanting to singing a song right now that could be about a glow stick
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anyone up for an rp pm me
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Khaos
You are a glow stick
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The hidden falls is empty.
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Also Khaos, can i adopt a wolf?
 Nesta
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Yeah that's a good idea
My dogs used to like trying to jump the fence because my neighbor had a cat and the cat would always taunt my dogs
That neighbor moved a few months ago
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BJake I'm so sorry! That wasn't on purpose
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Don't call me BJ.
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BJ
dark academia
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Retirement or natural every Monday.
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Killer like Art the clown.
 Kháos
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Nes-
That's Mister Khakis to you. LOL The fence needs fixed, my dad wants to get a fence like at one of our other houses but has to ask my mom's dad for permission and until then, the dogs love to dig right at the fence when they hear each other. :( So better to just take them outside when no other dogs are outside.

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 Nesta
12:07:01 Nes/Spider
Archer
You need a Glacial ice from barter and then if you have it you go to Pack> Account> Change faction allegiance
 Archen
12:05:54 
How do i change groups? (Neutral-darkseeker)
 Nesta
12:03:32 Nes/Spider
Khaos
Not me wanting to singing a song right now that could be about a glow stick
 Serpents
11:56:09 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
anyone up for an rp pm me
 Kháos
11:55:24 
Thank you
 Nesta
11:53:19 Nes/Spider
Khaos
You are a glow stick
 Kháos
11:51:50 
The hidden falls is empty.
 Kháos
11:51:10 
I feel like a glowstick
 Kháos
11:50:29 
Nes-
That sucks.

Archen-
Trading Post (for sale), WolfParty or breeding males to your females.
 Archen
11:47:37 
Also Khaos, can i adopt a wolf?
 Nesta
11:47:10 Nes/Spider
Khaos
Yeah that's a good idea
My dogs used to like trying to jump the fence because my neighbor had a cat and the cat would always taunt my dogs
That neighbor moved a few months ago
 VioletEcho
11:46:54 Is a dinosaur rawr
BJake I'm so sorry! That wasn't on purpose
 Nesta
11:45:49 Nes/Spider
BJake
Hmm
Kangaroos
 BJake
11:45:17 Don't call me BJ.
@VioletEcho
Don't call me BJ.
 VioletEcho
11:45:02 Is a dinosaur rawr
BJ
dark academia
 Kháos
11:43:25 
Archen-
Retirement or natural every Monday.
 Graywing
11:43:23 Slate, Gray
BJake

winter
space
 Echo Eclipse
11:43:04 Echo | (They/She/He)
BJake
Pirates
 Kháos
11:43:04 
BJake-
Killer like Art the clown.
 Kháos
11:42:48 
Nes-
That's Mister Khakis to you. LOL The fence needs fixed, my dad wants to get a fence like at one of our other houses but has to ask my mom's dad for permission and until then, the dogs love to dig right at the fence when they hear each other. :( So better to just take them outside when no other dogs are outside.




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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

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Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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