Interstellar Sun said:

Hey! I need a little help.

Art

Opinions on the animation sketch? ^^;

Also, dont mind that things appear and disappear, its just how I sketch-

Flying Ramen said:

Elbowen said:

@ Flying Ramen

Oh my gosh? I'm astounded! I love the details and the theme!!! You're awesome at this!

One thing I did find a little confusing- is that the snake body in the back is the same color and shading as the front? I found a bit hard to differentiate how the body curls. What if you added a slightly darker color to show the snake body extending into the bakground? ^^

Thank you! I definitely get what you're saying, someone else also suggested I could have made it less detailed as they went further back to give the effect of less focus? But I would be worried it would come off more as unfinished, if that makes sense

Elbowen said:

@Sun

In that case, I think the sitting part goes away too fast- is there a way to make it sit for a 0.5 second more? And let the smile also last a little longer?

The pacing is so fast!

Valiant Winecup said:

Well the movement looks fine to me!

~WinterBloom~ said:

All of your art are so good I don't know what to say...