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08:44:42 P'Sky/Sky-kun

You need to bury your food to prevent other packs/animals from finding it

08:43:53 Kneecap stealer

Go to lifecenter

08:34:09 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever
We don’t have food, just a lame ass piece of bread and the smallest water cup ever T-T

08:31:49 Phoenix~

Please stop stealing my food because i have only 50 feedings:(

08:29:53 Kneecap stealer

Someone yell at me to get out of bed and get ready

08:28:32 Kneecap stealer

So did mine, I go just for the food they have

08:27:22 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever
I use to but my parents forced me to much so I don’t go anymore

08:25:10 Kneecap stealer

Why, if you have beef with church, don't you go too

08:22:49 Kneecap stealer

Rat

You want me to go just because you have beef with church lmao

Willow moonlight

08:15:19

Ok

08:14:09 Pack of Sharp Snap

Full Moon Celebration. Starts every month on the 5th.

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Willow moonlight

08:12:41

What is FMC

08:10:25 Pack of Sharp Snap

You can't change allegiances during the FMC

08:07:43 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Flower
Could ask the mods again?

Willow moonlight

08:06:44

How do I change to a dark seeker

Willow moonlight

08:05:05

Good

Willow moonlight

08:05:01

Oh god idea

Willow moonlight

08:04:22

I finally got out of bed but I’m going to hunt Easter eggs in a bit

08:04:08 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever
I say no but I do have beef with church sooooo yeah

08:03:28 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

I might just change my name for my favorite holiday instead of every one, I’ll just change my flag colors

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08:44:42 P'Sky/Sky-kun

You need to bury your food to prevent other packs/animals from finding it

08:43:53 Kneecap stealer

Go to lifecenter

08:34:09 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever
We don’t have food, just a lame ass piece of bread and the smallest water cup ever T-T

08:31:49 Phoenix~

Please stop stealing my food because i have only 50 feedings:(

08:29:53 Kneecap stealer

Someone yell at me to get out of bed and get ready

08:28:32 Kneecap stealer

So did mine, I go just for the food they have

08:27:22 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever
I use to but my parents forced me to much so I don’t go anymore

08:25:10 Kneecap stealer

Why, if you have beef with church, don't you go too

08:22:49 Kneecap stealer

Rat

You want me to go just because you have beef with church lmao

Willow moonlight

08:15:19

Ok

08:14:09 Pack of Sharp Snap

Full Moon Celebration. Starts every month on the 5th.

The news page will show it when you log in

Willow moonlight

08:12:41

What is FMC

08:10:25 Pack of Sharp Snap

You can't change allegiances during the FMC

08:07:43 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Flower
Could ask the mods again?

Willow moonlight

08:06:44

How do I change to a dark seeker

Willow moonlight

08:05:05

Good

Willow moonlight

08:05:01

Oh god idea

Willow moonlight

08:04:22

I finally got out of bed but I’m going to hunt Easter eggs in a bit

08:04:08 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

4ever
I say no but I do have beef with church sooooo yeah

08:03:28 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

I might just change my name for my favorite holiday instead of every one, I’ll just change my flag colors

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM

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Thanks every for the critique

Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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